Lil_Pau

This poem is nice, good work, but I thought it was kinda 'overdone' and cliched.

OK. I've edited it.

Yes, I enjoyed this! It has good imagery. I have nothing else to say, except: Keep up the good work! :)

Such a sad and yes, powerful poem. It's very nice.

A short but beautiful poem. It had a lot of imagery, like Conrad Rice (& others) had mentioned. Good work! :)

Oh my, this is really sad! Very nice and unique, I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! :)

This is a good read. I pictured the sun while reading this. Good job!

Wow. This was really a good piece. It made me shiver slightly, but at the same time, it was nice. Good job.

This is beautiful. It has this warm atmosphere around it. You've got a good way with expressing feelings. Keep up!

This is a good piece of work! When I first viewed it, it caught my interest straighaway. And that's what a good poem needs! Keep up the good work!

Hey, this is well done! The rhymes were very fun and that made it a good read. Keep it up! :D

Oh my, this is such an amazing piece of work! Has some imagery & the emotions were portrayed really well! This is actually the first time I've come across a ...

I love this poem! Makes me laugh... Very entertaining & fun to read...keep it up!

What a beautiful piece of work! I have absolutely nothing to say now...it's so nice....*rereads poem* Good job!

Wow. I really like this one. It's short, but very expressive. It shows how much you love someone...and you've done a good job! Keep it up!