Lil_Pau

This wasn't terrible at all! It was really a nice read. I like the message conveyed throughout the poem. The rhyming was a little awkward though. Remember, poems don't need ...

Wow, did you really do this? I cannot really find any fault with it. The language, the depth, the flow, the imagery...all were really good. It's really rare to have ...

Wow, this is a very interesting dream. It's one dreamland that I would one to visit. XD Anyway, back to the poem.... I thought that it was really good! I ...

Ha, this was really a good one. Really funny. ^^ OK...about the poem...hmm... When I read it, I noticed it was written in a fast pace. Maybe it's just me, ...

Hi there! The title really caught my eye, and I had no idea what kind of poem it would be before clicking on the topic. But after finishing it, I ...

I really like this poem. Love poems tend to end up cliched, so I was really surprised when I read this one. It was done in a very unique way. ...

Wow. This poem did impress me. It was very unique and well-expressed. I could imagine myself walking on a stairway as I read this. The message conveyed here was clear ...

Wow. This is something very unique, not any ordinary love poem. Like niteowl mentioned, it was something we all could relate to. I enjoyed this. Really. Just one thing: "the ...

Wow! Good job on this. It carries a message that everyone can relate to. You should add some punctuation to make the poem flow better. "The eternity that is spent ...

It's simple but really enjoyable to read. The rhyme is good and fits well. The message is really inspiring. You need to balance the syllables though, like mentioned above in ...

Wow. That was a great poem. I could not find any fault with it. The rhyme went well and the tone and message conveyed was very clear and understandable. I ...

Wow. That was really touching. Though you did not really emphasize Felicity's depression that led her to kill herself, it was good work. It needs some revising...but so far, good ...

Welcome to YWS! The message you conveyed here was good, however, I did not really enjoy this poem as most of the lines sounded a little awkward (the flow wasn't ...

Wow. This was really good, I enjoyed it. Your use of language was good, and your rhyming was wonderful. Just one thing: try not to repeat the same words/phrases in ...

This is a really sad and beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this. It really touched the heart. Just add some punctuation, that will help your poem flow better. Overall, great ...