LilPWilly

Are you single?😘 Jk

Dang. I love the description of you and the water, it hits a truth that isn’t easily expressed—because words of lesser loft cannot do them justice. I love the ‘can ...

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Oof The ‘still image’ followed by ‘newborn’ is pure genus. Heart wrenching, though. Beautiful work.

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Dang. I hate serial killers. Just hearing about them makes me so frickin mad. Excellent writing, and a heckuva twist, I didn’t see it coming, UNTIL IT WAS TOO LATE!!!

Omg i just wrote a whole bunch right here and YWS deleted it lol Maybe I%u2019ll come back and rewrite it later but that just killed my motivation %uD83D%uDE02

When Talmeer comes in, he says %u2018when tried%u2019, instead of %u2018when I tried%u2019 And in Anna%u2019s immediate response, she says %u2018you guys know each other for a long time...%u2019 when ...

In paragraph 3, it says, %u2018very little rarely%u2019 when I think you meant very rarely, or very little. WAIT! As I was typing this, I realized that that%u2019s not a ...

It doesn%u2019t loll, it%u2019s a niche reference: Phineas and Ferb? Aglets? Ofc

Ofc

There’s a lot I don’t quite understand, but I like the imagery and the paradoxes in the 4th stanza.

Dang, good background, well done! Only one confusion, Layla ‘applauded’, after which Talmeer started a round of applause, maybe you meant that Layla ‘lauded’ her? I really like the character ...

🤧good stuf Un problema poquito. Did you mean hydrogen peroxide? Me gusta mucho.

🤧good stuf Un problema poquito. Did you mean hydrogen peroxide? Me gusta mucho.