LilPWilly

Ofc loll

I think you are one of the most genuine and inspiring people I%u2019ve seen on this site. %u2764%uFE0F

Yes plz write more lol There is already so much emotional investiture. The concepts are thrilling.

This is so good, the writing is so thorough. I will follow for more.

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Wow the rich imagery is so real it’s refreshing. Who do you take inspiration from? I think, if you mean this to be jarring, the broken phrases definitely help, but ...

Your grammar is interesting, are you not a native English speaker? I like this, it’s easygoing, I’m interested to see what comes next.

Dang nice. It’s really interesting how you have contrasting takes on the headphones’ influence, first covering up the sublime silence with a guttural voice, then melting souls, healing hearts, and

Thanks!

Thank you! I really appreciate this because simple was just what I was going for. Yes, I wrote this about a real person, and unfortunately I%u2019m too far away to ...

OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING!,!!,!,,, YUR WRITING IS BALLER HOUR FLOW IS FANTASYIC YOUR IDEAS ARE UNBELIEVABLE,,,,!,!, PLEAS PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A CLASS OR SMTHING SO I CAN BE ...

Yeah tbh idk how to separate the stanzas. It looks fine until I hit publish. And yeah, I used to listen to a lot of 70s music, it kinda reminds ...

Thank you! I%u2019ve still got a bad mic and stuff, but I just got a new job so who knows, maybe I%u2019ll finish it soon. I%u2019ll remember to post it ...

Thanks Hailey!

Thank you lol means a lot%u2764%uFE0F

Haha I don%u2019t blame you lol this was a challenge, so the elephants thing was kinda required. I wrote this Christmas week, so it just found it%u2019s way into the ...