LilMissPanic

Hello there, Panic here with a friendly review! First off, I'd like to say I was really able to connect with this, there were plenty of times when I use ...

This sounds like it has great potential to become a much longer poem. It could even possible be turned into a story if you wanted to. There isn't much that ...

Hi there, Panic here with a friendly review! First of all, let me just say I really love this piece. I know so many of my friends who have gone ...

Hello there, Panic here with a friendly review! :] Let me just start off by saying I loved this! I've always been a fan of those short lined poems, I ...

The first stanza is awkwardly worded, I'd consider revising there. You also should be careful how you separate your lines, when a line is broken up it makes you want ...

Hi there! LilMissPanic here with a friendly review! :] First off let me me say I love your poem! I felt like I could deeply connect! I've always had a ...

I noticed this was your first post, congrats and welcome to the family! ^-^ I'm new too so I'm glad to be able to help some one else who is ...

First off great story! I was a huge fan of Percy Jackson when I was younger so it was pretty nostalgic for me to read this. I did notice something ...

I loved it! I don't know if you were trying to but i feel like that kinda perfectly described today's society. To me it basically told a story of a ...

This poem has a very dark an eerie feel to me. I like it! It almost reminds me of a haunted house or a dark stormy night. The only thing ...

First of all let me say I loved this! The name sounded so interesting and caught my attention when I was scrolling through the other pieces of writing. It was ...

This sounds like something my friend would like. There's really only a few things I noticed, unless they were suppose to be like that? The very first line, says "I ...