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Lightsong

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 17.1: Gael

    Thanks for the review! Ohoho, you're in for a surprise. :3

    May 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3.2: Ilami

    Thanks for the reviews! :D Yeah, I can see how there are similarities between the school system with Hogwarts, though I think there are differences that make each of them ...

    May 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 17.1: Gael

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad I've done the kissing scene okay-ly, because that's my biggest concern in this chapter. :P Other things also I agree with. Serra's blessing isn't ...

    May 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1.2: Ilami

    Thanks for the review! Yeah, she's too young - I adjusted her age in later chapters. :D

    May 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 16.2: Ilami

    Well I guess I'll post it soon then. :D

    May 24, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 16.2: Ilami

    Thanks for the review! I have Chapter 17 finished, do you think I should post it now?

    May 24, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 16.2: Ilami

    That was fast! Thanks for the review. And yes, the next one is from Gael. :D

    May 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Through Silence

    This review is not useful at all.

    May 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2.1: Gael

    Thanks for the review! I realize I have an issue with grammar, but I would prefer if other aspects like characters, plot, worldbuilding or flow is given more attention. This ...

    May 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: An AI Speaks

    I couldn't finish this, but I like it through the halfway I read. Poke me the next day to review.

    Apr 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Midas Gold

    Horror. It's better put under horror genre. >.>

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Omg if you ever want to review my piece, make it Japanese-like like this. o:

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Clash of Desires

    Thanks for the review! I agree with the dashes/brief pauses. It's my experimentation using them, so I guess I have to polish more on using them. :D

    Apr 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Clash of Desires

    Thanks for the review! Your interpretation is spot-on, and I'm glad my message goes through! :D

    Apr 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Our Secret Dance [2]

    Hey, thanks a lot for the review!

    Mar 31, 2018


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom