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Lightsong

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 17.1: Gael

    Thanks for the review! Ohoho, you're in for a surprise. :3

    May 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3.2: Ilami

    Thanks for the reviews! :D Yeah, I can see how there are similarities between the school system with Hogwarts, though I think there are differences that make each of them ...

    May 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 17.1: Gael

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad I've done the kissing scene okay-ly, because that's my biggest concern in this chapter. :P Other things also I agree with. Serra's blessing isn't ...

    May 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1.2: Ilami

    Thanks for the review! Yeah, she's too young - I adjusted her age in later chapters. :D

    May 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 16.2: Ilami

    Well I guess I'll post it soon then. :D

    May 24, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 16.2: Ilami

    Thanks for the review! I have Chapter 17 finished, do you think I should post it now?

    May 24, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 16.2: Ilami

    That was fast! Thanks for the review. And yes, the next one is from Gael. :D

    May 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Through Silence

    This review is not useful at all.

    May 16, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2.1: Gael

    Thanks for the review! I realize I have an issue with grammar, but I would prefer if other aspects like characters, plot, worldbuilding or flow is given more attention. This ...

    May 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: An AI Speaks

    I couldn't finish this, but I like it through the halfway I read. Poke me the next day to review.

    Apr 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Midas Gold

    Horror. It's better put under horror genre. >.>

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Omg if you ever want to review my piece, make it Japanese-like like this. o:

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Clash of Desires

    Thanks for the review! I agree with the dashes/brief pauses. It's my experimentation using them, so I guess I have to polish more on using them. :D

    Apr 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Clash of Desires

    Thanks for the review! Your interpretation is spot-on, and I'm glad my message goes through! :D

    Apr 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Our Secret Dance [2]

    Hey, thanks a lot for the review!

    Mar 31, 2018


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