Lightsong

Hey, thanks for the review. Totally agree with what you've said. :3 The teenagers they're finding are the ones who have lights with them. Merah is one of them since ...

You're welcome. I might review the next one sooner or later. :p

I like the idea behind this.

Ohohoho, of course, there's a way with which Damon knows Merah and her light. It's just how Scarlet knows there are other lights in the school--by having glimpses of them. ...

Like niteowl below said, they're mirrored descriptions. It's when everything that you think is wonderful changes to something not so when you realize it's all an illusion of someone falling ...

What I'm trying to say is that there are many forms of poetry out there, and mine is simply free verse.

No. This is. I'm not going to explain to you poetry isn't specific in definition.

No, poetry is more than that.

I'm not a pro writer. o.o You give me credits too much. *blush* You're welcome, anyway! :D

Remind me to review this later. ;)

Haha, it's okay, really. :)

Ah, thanks for the review! If you're familiar with Aphrodite's lore, she was married to Hephaestus, but loved other gods, Ares included. This poem was basically the forbidden love the ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I posted this after the round in which this was submitted ended, so it was allowed. :D

Thanks for the review! :D The reason why I gave her the solution so soon was because there would be challenges to actually get the ruby. The focus on this ...

Eh, I think it's because you're using dialogue apostrophes. It's okay, I totally get you now. I think I wasn't paying attention at that moment. xD