Lightsong

Reading your review is always a pleasure. Thanks!

Ooh, I always love your reviews. Straight forward and constructive. Will definitely consider this for future draft. Thanks!

Thanks for the review! I'm torn about putting this as sci-fi, really, because while magic is involved, some things are explained scientifically. Like, Ilal is the deity of humans, but ...

Oh, dang, it should be the Divine Six! Thanks for pointing that out. xD

Thanks for the review! Aishah was 12, but she was much more well-read than Walid, thus the words she used. :P I'll notify you for the second part if you ...

Ah, interesting! Keep up the good job. :)

Thanks for the review! May I ask how you put the stars in there?

You're welcome. :)

It seems like readers are confused with the second stanza. Would it help if I rephrase it to: "Something / that has perched on my shoulder ceases; / my skin ...

Thanks for the review! Feel the same with the calcium thingy. xD Gonna take notes about other parts too. :D

Oh, this is actual the summary of the story - the said story has been written years ago and it's in need of major editing because it's horrible. Perhaps I'll ...

Thanks for the review! :D

Thanks! :D

Thanks for the review! :D I have difficulties in operating the inner organs of this imagery, so it's only on the surface that I show. :)

I don't even know why you think a winged hope is a devil. But whatever. Thanks for the review.