Lightsong

You're welcome! You can say, 'Our eyes widened, as big as our fears' if you want to make it a bit longer.

Hahaha yeah! Nice analogy. :D

You're welcome! Yeah, I hate Russ, but it's a love-to-hate kind of hate! xD

Hey, you must've been putting a lot of time making this review. Thanks! :D

Thanks for the review!

Every review is helpful as long as it's long. Thanks for the review! :D

Aww, thanks for the review! You're back, b0ss!

I haven't thought about the details of the pursuer, but suffice to say his family's held hostage by Venaria and if he wants them to be free, he has to ...

Ah, I see! Poor creatures.

Aww, I know this story! It's about your short story about the Moon, eh? Love it.

Omg is it Wayne?! o:

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to keep these points in mind for further drafts. :D

Oops! That's a mistake there. Kestari is Lio's priest, but he disguises as Xesar's priest to gain support from both followers of Lio and Xesar. In truth, Xesar escaped Lio's ...

Thanks for the review! And yes, it's like a crossbow! xD

Thanks for the review! As for the language, I just made it up. :P I'm only bilingual. ;-;