User avatar

Lightsong

Lightsong

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 26

    Hey, it's me again! “Of course I’d enjoy that, but it’s not really about what I enjoy, is it? It’s about saving the world! And I want to help in ...

    Aug 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 10.2

    Ooh, this will be my second review for the day! :D “Nice to meet you all. How did you escape Crescent Moon?” “Ran. Madeline made a portal here,” said Ayda. ...

    Aug 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 6

    Hey, I'm here again! It's interesting how Thomas reacts to killing the enemies. While obviously he has no experience in killing people, I can somehow understand why he doesn't feel ...

    Aug 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 5

    Hey, I'm here again! "I understand that the chefs have prepared quite a feast for us, so without keeping you in suspense any longer, let us get started on enjoying ...

    Aug 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 25

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D I think I've reviewed some chapters of this novel, though they're earlier ones. I'm not sure what's currently happening, but I like what I ...

    Aug 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 4

    Hey, it's me again in the quest of rescuing as much pieces as I could from the nasty Green Room. :D Follow my orders, or deal with the consequences. This ...

    Aug 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 3

    Hey, I'm here to review! This was the first time he had seen the king in good lighting, and he realized that the king used to be handsome. Used to ...

    Aug 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sever | Chapter 3: Introductions

    OH WOW I NEVER KNEW. Hey, it's me with another review for you. First thing to mention is definitely Lissa's transition to Alex. Frankly speaking, I've never read a story ...

    Aug 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 10.1

    Hey, it's me again! It's weird to see Cinder reacts to him being evil this casually when he wakes up. Since further on he refers to him being possessed as ...

    Aug 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sever | Chapter 4: The Slayer Society

    Okay, I'm here to leave a quick review. What I like about this story is that the writing is simple. It's not bogged down by heavy description of scenes (though ...

    Aug 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 9.2

    Hey, I'm here yet again! I'm typing this on phone, so bear with me if the quality's degrading. I love how the action scenes flow well, and I think this ...

    Aug 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 9.1

    Ooh, done! I have finished reading this chapter. And... there is not much to say about it. o: The action scenes are executed well, the transition between each one of ...

    Aug 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Tap, Tap, Tap

    Wait, that's it? Hey, I'm here to review. There's nothing much I can say about this story because it's pretty short, but the ending definitely is something to talk about. ...

    Jul 24, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Our World

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D We were in the prime of elementary school. By that point in time, I had become an outcast among my classmates. Wait whut? >.> ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 6.2

    Hey, back to review some. I have to say, the first thing that excites me is that Ben is legit a bae here, reading the fourth paragraph. Like, I'm not ...

    May 12, 2017


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn