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Re: Pineapples
Hey, I'm here to review! :D I've read your other poems, actually, but they were so deep I was afraid I couldn't give an adequate review. >.> This one seems ...
Sep 10, 2015 -
Re: Beastling : Chapter 8
I'm pretty sure you've familiarized yourself with my style of review so here I go! :D First, the suggestions; That was the woman. The woman who'd been with the man ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: Currently Spazzing
Hey, I'm here to review this interesting piece! ;) First, the suggestions; I keep stopping to breathe, laugh, shake my head, and then continue while my face attempts to break ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: Not Suitable For Children Under 12 Years
Hey, I'm here to review! :D First, the suggestions; and prescribed me with adolescence I’d heard that it was good for me, A punctuation after "adolescence". You might think punctuations, ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: '22' Parody
Oh, my god. xD I'm here to review. :D I don't listen to this song but since I've heard some of Taylor's, I think I can imagine how it sounds ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Too Late
Hey, I'm here to review! I'm interested with this suicide theme as I want to know your perspective on it. First, the suggestions; "Hey!" I heard behind me, the sound ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Sleep Tight.
Okay! Let us get you out of the Green Room (to another colour-based room)! :D First, the suggestions; You can film blockbusters just for me, You'd fly me to England ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: My Life, My Race
Hey, I'm here for the requested review! :D Okay, firstly, suggestions; Its always the lonely hour, "It was always the lonely hour". But found nothing from any clue I track, ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Shaping Faith: Chapter 5, Part 2
Hey! I'm going to review here! :D First, the suggestions (which are few, you've my job harder D:); They held each other tight, and for a moment, Verona everything that ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Eight
Hey, I'm back to review again. This story isn't bad. ;) First, the suggestions (they're few, you make my job difficult ;-;); "His father or Kaisar? Given the complicated choice, ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 7
Hey, I'm back to complete my reviews! :D As usual, the suggestions; I sit down in a chair, my posture regal, and rest my elbow on the table, accepting the ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 8
Hey! I see you finally use the tagging method to bring attention to your pieces. Well, here I am to review! :D First, the suggestions; Lindon narrows his eyes and ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: I Hold My Own Heart
Hey, I'm here to review your poem! :D First, the suggestions; I find it curious, the heart in my hand still warm, fleshy, beating. Since these are line breaks, you ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: The New Generation--Chapter 1: Going to Camp
Hey, I'm here to review! This piece interests me since it's a Percy Jackson's spin-off fanfiction. ; ) Just to let you know, I enjoy reading it. First, the suggestions. ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 1
Hey, I'm here to review. I bet you love all the attentions you have now. ;) It was one of the only things that could help take her mind off ...
Sep 2, 2015
