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Lightsong

  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Pineapples

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D I've read your other poems, actually, but they were so deep I was afraid I couldn't give an adequate review. >.> This one seems ...

    Sep 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Beastling : Chapter 8

    I'm pretty sure you've familiarized yourself with my style of review so here I go! :D First, the suggestions; That was the woman. The woman who'd been with the man ...

    Sep 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Currently Spazzing

    Hey, I'm here to review this interesting piece! ;) First, the suggestions; I keep stopping to breathe, laugh, shake my head, and then continue while my face attempts to break ...

    Sep 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Not Suitable For Children Under 12 Years

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D First, the suggestions; and prescribed me with adolescence I’d heard that it was good for me, A punctuation after "adolescence". You might think punctuations, ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: '22' Parody

    Oh, my god. xD I'm here to review. :D I don't listen to this song but since I've heard some of Taylor's, I think I can imagine how it sounds ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Health Re: Too Late

    Hey, I'm here to review! I'm interested with this suicide theme as I want to know your perspective on it. First, the suggestions; "Hey!" I heard behind me, the sound ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Sleep Tight.

    Okay! Let us get you out of the Green Room (to another colour-based room)! :D First, the suggestions; You can film blockbusters just for me, You'd fly me to England ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Life, My Race

    Hey, I'm here for the requested review! :D Okay, firstly, suggestions; Its always the lonely hour, "It was always the lonely hour". But found nothing from any clue I track, ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Shaping Faith: Chapter 5, Part 2

    Hey! I'm going to review here! :D First, the suggestions (which are few, you've my job harder D:); They held each other tight, and for a moment, Verona everything that ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Eight

    Hey, I'm back to review again. This story isn't bad. ;) First, the suggestions (they're few, you make my job difficult ;-;); "His father or Kaisar? Given the complicated choice, ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 7

    Hey, I'm back to complete my reviews! :D As usual, the suggestions; I sit down in a chair, my posture regal, and rest my elbow on the table, accepting the ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 8

    Hey! I see you finally use the tagging method to bring attention to your pieces. Well, here I am to review! :D First, the suggestions; Lindon narrows his eyes and ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Hold My Own Heart

    Hey, I'm here to review your poem! :D First, the suggestions; I find it curious, the heart in my hand still warm, fleshy, beating. Since these are line breaks, you ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The New Generation--Chapter 1: Going to Camp

    Hey, I'm here to review! This piece interests me since it's a Percy Jackson's spin-off fanfiction. ; ) Just to let you know, I enjoy reading it. First, the suggestions. ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 1

    Hey, I'm here to review. I bet you love all the attentions you have now. ;) It was one of the only things that could help take her mind off ...

    Sep 2, 2015


As if you were on fire from within. The moon lives in the lining of your skin.
— Pablo Neruda