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Re: How to Attract Readers
Hey, I'm here to give you a short review. I understand the frustration of some readers that this piece is unoriginal, has been done, before, etc. etc. But for me, ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1: An Ordinary Day
Hey, so I'm here to review the requested novel (huh, it's fresh to see it the other way around, isn't it?)! :D "Well then, I'll cut you some slack and ...
Nov 11, 2015 -
Re: Left Out
Omigosh, I'm so offended. Just kidding. :p Here to give the requested review! You all are here, around me, I see you everyday, hear you talking This is a run-on ...
Nov 11, 2015 -
Re: How To Survive The Zombie Apocalypes in Eight Simple Steps
Hey, I'm here for a quick review. Anyway, I adore this piece. The steps are spot-on, with passable logic and reasoning behind them. I like how you put in a ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: Not What It Looks Like
Hey, I'm totally attracted to this piece because you mention about how short it is (250 words). :D Well, I totally want to echo what steam has said. This dialogue-centric ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Can Mean Real
Hey, I'm here to leave a review as requested! :D First, the suggestions ; They make it look easy; even Veronica can do it and she's only 8, but every ...
Oct 2, 2015 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Twelve
Hey, I'm here to leave a review. :D First, the suggestions ; "I think I told you that." Nothing's wrong with this, but it sounds better if you add an ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Dream A Little Dream: Chapter One and Two
Hey, I'm here to leave a review as requested. :) Anyway, the suggestions ; This was the first party she had ever been to seeing as she was only fourteen ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: Tears of Blood
Hey, I'm here to review. :) I'm in the same vein with fortis. You see, this kind of poetry, where we feel like we're useless, isolated, and alone, is a ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire: Chapter 1
Hey, I'm here to review as requested. :) First, the suggestions ; Her eyes wander from the monster's remains, which soon burst into bright light that fills the sky, to ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Theme in this Poem is Loneliness
Hey, I'm here to review, and I need to make this quick. Happy Review Day, anyway! :D I like how the persona expresses himself by playing guitar - it gives ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Reflections
Hey, I'm here to review! :D Urgh, the pain of making ourselves perfect. That's how I see this poem. Let's go one by one: In hidden mirrors it cascades among ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Skies, Cloudy Knees
Hey, I'm here to review your poem! :D Well, I have to agree with fortis. The humor in this short poem doesn't come through until the last line, when the ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Bambi
Hey, I'm here to review! Sorry if my review doesn't make much sense, I've just woken up. x.x Okay, first of all, I suggest you to drop the rhythm. It's ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Battle Has Begun
Hey, I'm here to review this poem! :D Happy Review Day, anyway! :D Now, let's get down to business, shall we? ;) As I combust in hope Of just hitting ...
Sep 27, 2015
