Lightsong

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Hey, I'm here to review! I'm compelled to because the world you've shown us and its people are interesting things, and one can't help but comment them! :D Anyway, as ...

Hey, I'm here to review! I'm not that good at reviewing poetry, though, so pardon me if what I say doesn't make sense. >.> I would go through the technical ...

Hey, I'm here to do a review again! Part the advantage of having a one-day off from work. :D Suggestions ; Hey, I'm here to do a review again! Part ...

Hey hey hey, I'm here for another review. :D As always, suggestions : A great billowing carpet of white clouds swirled below Zoltar. His shadow danced on the sun lit ...

I decided to leave another review before I went to sleep, so here it is! :D Suggestions; “Greetings your greatness,” Hisster hissed in an oily voice, gracefully bowing with his ...

Hey! Sorry for the very late review. I'm currently busy and have lack of motivation, nowadays. ;-; Anyways, suggestions . “Scorpus would want you to fight,” a small voice whispered ...

I'm here to review! Happy Review Day! :D *le gasp* Etana is the assassin?! Now that I think about it, having a servant that can be confused as male or ...

Lolz, I told you I like chapter nine and then but I forgot to review this one. Anyway, let's not waste the time! :D Politics! This chapter screams politics the ...

Hey, I'm back to review again! This chapter is slightly better than chapter nine since not only does it talk about politic, it blends it with religion, which is an ...

Hey, Happy Review Day! I'm here to review. :D Anyway, I would like to save Chapter Nine and Ten are by far my favourite chapters (I might or might not ...

Hey, I'm back! Since this chapter is short, I'm going to go through technical stuff mostly. Suggestions: “You're on time, surprisingly,” Hisster noted coldly as Zoltar walking into the throne ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Ooh, I'm looking for poems like this with no consistent, abundance of metaphors and whatnot, and simply convey thought processes. I like it, seeing ...

Hey, sorry for the late review! I'm trying to get into reviewing mood. -3- Anyway, on to the story. Zoltar rushed back home towards the shadow lands, his wings creating ...

Hey, I'm here to review all your chapters! It's been a while since I review stuffs, so I'm a little rusty. Hope you can bear with me. :D First, the ...