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Re: [Review Contest] Queenstar Chapter 2
Hey BlueAfrica, here I am to review for the contest! :D I'm pretty excited to review a chapter from your other fantasy novel. The title itself is gorgeous and attractive; ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: For Freedom/Four: Three Days to Run
Hey, I'm here to review! :D Running was not a safe option; in fact it was a terrible idea for a number of different reasons. But, she didn’t really have ...
Feb 2, 2018 -
Re: Gemini // Ex Libris - pt.1
Hey, I'm here to review! Glad you keep this project going! :D So it's Gemini first, yasssss, my star. c: But it could not be denied that, the loss of ...
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Hiding in Sight Part 2 Chp. 1
Hey, I'm here to give a quick review! :D Ooh, my. While this part is brief and vague, I enjoy it very much. I like the atmosphere you've created here; ...
Jan 26, 2018 -
Re: The Grateful Immigrant
Hey, I'm here to give you a quick review! :D Salman Bahatra, an Indian storekeeper and recent immigrant to America, had done well in the United States and felt a ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: Deity Project: Theme VI - Humanity
Hey, I'm here to give you a short review! :D First of all, I'm going to comment on the format of the poem. It's obviously free-style, but what catches my ...
Nov 14, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastlciff Series #1) - Chapter 43
Hey, I'm here to leave a short review! :D I sigh, finishing my cereal and throwing the bowl into the sink to be cleaned later before rushing upstairs to where ...
Nov 10, 2017 -
Re: Every Hero
Hey, I'm here to give you a short review! :D I have such a soft spot on rhymed poems, but in YWS I am sceptic on whether the poets can ...
Nov 9, 2017 -
Re: Is This My Doing?
Hey, I'm here to give you a short review! :D The first thing that stands out to me is the format of this poem. I understand it's an acrostic one, ...
Nov 9, 2017 -
Re: The Goddess's Case (Part 1)
Hey, I'm here to leave a review! :D With a quick bow to the clustered girls, whose eyes are cold against Hester's back, he slots his hand in hers and ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 4
Hey, I'm here for the requested review! Sorry for the lateness! >.< "Yes" replied the brave new Guardian, standing up to exit the ship. I don't mind typos - we ...
Oct 26, 2017 -
Re: 4 am chats
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D Personally, I like this kind of poem. It's short, therefore making the reader focuses on each word more than say, 15-stanzas ...
Oct 16, 2017 -
Re: Keep Driving
Hey, I'm here to review as requested! Sorry for the long wait. :P The first five sentences easily capture my interest. Separated to form short paragraphs, it makes reading easier ...
Oct 12, 2017 -
Re: Theseus and the Minotaur Retelling
Hey, I'm here to give a quick review. :D The first thing I would like to point out is that there's nothing in the essay that indicates this is indeed ...
Sep 17, 2017 -
Re: A Rose Without Her Sky
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :D "I need you, Sky," Rose says, "I need you to be closer to me." "I can't, Rose, I have to be ...
Sep 8, 2017