-
Re: The Silence Is Too Grand
Hey! I'm here to give a quick review. Since you're my potential opponent, I'd give you crappy review. e.e Just kidding. ;) I'm sorry for your loss. I've a brother ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Two?
Right, so I'm going to review. :D Sorry it took a while! >.< Warning: this review won't be as helpful as you'd like it to be because there are compliments ...
May 14, 2016 -
Re: You Lied To Me
Hey, I'm here to give a quick review! :D So, I would say the thing that I noted most in the poem: the use of colons. Colons is a punctuation ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: I Don't Think
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :) Before I'm going through the context of this poem, allow me to give an opinion about the structure of this poem. ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Kolfer: Prologue
Hey, Ellstar! I'm here to make a quick review! :D Firemen don’t necessarily like running into burning buildings with hoses that look like elephant trunks—policemen don’t necessarily enjoy shooti
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Wilted Flowers
Hey! I've decided you are worthy for my 250th review. So here's a quick poem! :D I'm going to go through the technical aspect first before talking about the poem's ...
May 6, 2016 -
Re: I'm Sorry
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D Wow! Crayon--that's a brilliant simile! I like how you focus on that image and expand on it, and how the short ...
May 5, 2016 -
Re: High-5
Hey, I'm here to give a quick review! :D This did make me smile, but it did so at the end of it. The first four lines seemed to be ...
May 5, 2016 -
Re: Long Lost
Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D Wow, this story really demands me to have a long period of thinking. Everything is realistically delivered, and the emotions are conveyed ...
May 4, 2016 -
Re: Maybe
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :D Ooh, love the message here. It speaks the truth about some people around us, how they make us feel low about ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: Seventh Crown XII
Happy Review Day! Here's me to leave a quick review. c: Cage and Rebecca exchanged alarmed looks, this did not sound good. Neither Cage or Rebecca knew what to do, ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 40
Haven't read the rest, but have seen this around. Here I am to leave a quick review! :D Gosh, the first paragraph is cheesy! >.< It's not a bad thing; ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: Gone Too Fast
Hey, I'm here for a quick review. :) I like the idea behind this. It's a sweet thing when we explore a mother's mind when she remembers the old time ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Sailing the Storm
Hey, destinywriter27. I hate to break it to you, but this poem doesn't fit to be rhymed. The first two lines already show that. I had decided to set ashore, ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter Two
Hey, Catalyst. :D Details slipped away, sinking into darkness, leaving hazy, broken memories. This is quite a nice way to describe it, although I think 'sinking into darkness' is pushing ...
Mar 25, 2016
