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Lightsong

  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Silence Is Too Grand

    Hey! I'm here to give a quick review. Since you're my potential opponent, I'd give you crappy review. e.e Just kidding. ;) I'm sorry for your loss. I've a brother ...

    May 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Two?

    Right, so I'm going to review. :D Sorry it took a while! >.< Warning: this review won't be as helpful as you'd like it to be because there are compliments ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: You Lied To Me

    Hey, I'm here to give a quick review! :D So, I would say the thing that I noted most in the poem: the use of colons. Colons is a punctuation ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: I Don't Think

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :) Before I'm going through the context of this poem, allow me to give an opinion about the structure of this poem. ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Kolfer: Prologue

    Hey, Ellstar! I'm here to make a quick review! :D Firemen don’t necessarily like running into burning buildings with hoses that look like elephant trunks—policemen don’t necessarily enjoy shooti

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Wilted Flowers

    Hey! I've decided you are worthy for my 250th review. So here's a quick poem! :D I'm going to go through the technical aspect first before talking about the poem's ...

    May 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I'm Sorry

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D Wow! Crayon--that's a brilliant simile! I like how you focus on that image and expand on it, and how the short ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: High-5

    Hey, I'm here to give a quick review! :D This did make me smile, but it did so at the end of it. The first four lines seemed to be ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Long Lost

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D Wow, this story really demands me to have a long period of thinking. Everything is realistically delivered, and the emotions are conveyed ...

    May 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Maybe

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :D Ooh, love the message here. It speaks the truth about some people around us, how they make us feel low about ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Seventh Crown XII

    Happy Review Day! Here's me to leave a quick review. c: Cage and Rebecca exchanged alarmed looks, this did not sound good. Neither Cage or Rebecca knew what to do, ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 40

    Haven't read the rest, but have seen this around. Here I am to leave a quick review! :D Gosh, the first paragraph is cheesy! >.< It's not a bad thing; ...

    Apr 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Gone Too Fast

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review. :) I like the idea behind this. It's a sweet thing when we explore a mother's mind when she remembers the old time ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Sailing the Storm

    Hey, destinywriter27. I hate to break it to you, but this poem doesn't fit to be rhymed. The first two lines already show that. I had decided to set ashore, ...

    Mar 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter Two

    Hey, Catalyst. :D Details slipped away, sinking into darkness, leaving hazy, broken memories. This is quite a nice way to describe it, although I think 'sinking into darkness' is pushing ...

    Mar 25, 2016


i think once every new ywser realizes they can manifest themselves into the quote gen by making a post about the quote gen, they make a very inconspicuous post about the quote gen, but deep in their hearts, they know they’ll see that post at the bottom of the page one day. (yeah, i see you mods. you brought this upon us)
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