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Re: Anthill
Hey, I'm here to review as requested! :D Please keep in mind I've taken a long break from reviewing, and therefore might be rusty in this department. First of all, ...
Jul 25, 2016 -
Re: Burned 7.1
Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D I haven't read the previous chapter, so excuse me for my confusion at some parts. Will lets out a frustrated sigh, obviously ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: "Foxes and Rag Dolls": The Emphasis on Social Relationships in The Little Prince
Hey, I'm here to review! I don't read the book, by the way, so sorry if I'm confused at some parts. :D Alright, so I took a glance on this ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (7)
Hey, I'm here to review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so please excuse any misunderstanding or confusion due to that! :D Mosi invited us all to lunch at Ava’s ...
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Three
Hmm, it's time to review this and not procrastinate further. '^' Well, the first thing I note is the change of point of view in here. It is quite confusing ...
Jun 9, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Two
Hey, I'm here to review again! :D Let's get into this, shall we? He tied his spaghetti into bows, his tied ties into bows, his victims intestines into bows, even ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter One
Hey, I'm here for a quick review! Your short stories are always superb, so I'm excited to see how you fare on novel. :D I like the opening paragraph. It ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Forget Me
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D I call myself by my last mistake take the beating and guilt as a sign no one wants to know if ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Tuition Fee
Hey, I'm here to leave the promised review! :D “I can help you out, kung gusto mo , but only if you accept my offer.” He then pulled out a ...
May 27, 2016 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 14 (Cantina Confrontation)
Hey, Hattable! :D Here's to leave a review. Avery eventually did, but only when Jason mumbled something from behind his menu about it “not being that bad”. I think it's ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: Party anthem
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. I'm not sure about this poem... is it supposed to be lyrical? Because I find it better fit as a lyric rather ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: Poet's Branch (Part 1)
Hey, I'm here for a quick review. :D By the end of May, when the flowers were in full bloom and the fruit on the apricots trees were perfectly ripe, ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: Miss Fortune
Hey, boss Outvaders! Here to review! :D Recently, Fate has been doing everything to catch my attention: destroying my notes, breaking my belongings, causing car crashes, everything. But today, she ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Red Wolf
Hey, I'm here for a quick review. :D Early that morning, I stepped down off my grandfather’s porch and gave the wooden black bear standing guard at the gate a ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 1
Hey, I'm here to review as promised! :D First, the technical stuff because my inner perfectionist is too strong : 1. A cold dark mess that was quickly over taken ...
May 19, 2016
