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Re: Cuddle Application 4: What's the Number for 911
Hey, I'm here to review! :D The material was thick in my hand and a hiding space just small enough to fit a young girl. There's no grammatical error in ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 5
Hey, I'm here to leave a review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so pardon me if I'm confused at parts that have been explained earlier on. :D The restaurant ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Chaos Edge 1.1
Hey, I'm here to review. :D "What would you do if the world was ending?" Since the question is about something that might happen, I think it would be best ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 3, Dinner
Hey, I'm here to review! :D Neither Father nor Mother looked satisfied with our answer. I introduce you to the first rule of writing: show, don't tell! :D You've told ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 3, Part 2
Hey, I'm here to review. :D Ayda's pack and Madeline's arms full of herbs. I realized when I see the word 'pack', it reminds me to a pack of wolves ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. I generally avoid novel chapters unless the novels have interesting titles, and this one does. I would check a novel chapter to ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue
Hey, I'm going to start with this piece for RevMo. BE HONOURED. Lel, just kidding. :D Let's get into it. He could taste the blood that was slowly running down ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 33
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :D His voice is a hiss in my ear as his icy ears look at the door. You know what I'm going ...
Aug 29, 2016 -
Re: The Daily Life of Nomaru-kun - Prologue: Normal life
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. This prologue excels in being humorous without trying too hard, which is a huge plus for you. The event is unfolded naturally, ...
Aug 29, 2016 -
Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 2 Part 2
Hulloo, I'm here to review. Have been meaning to, actually. ;) "I'm here, it's okay!" she said brightly. A better adverb would be better used here. 'brightly' just makes the ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Midori - a RWBY/Shattered Moons side story
Hey, I'm here to review. :D Evidently, her mom had helped herself to them in the morning while Midori slept in. Somewhere outside, she heard the rhythmic hacking sound of ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Cuddle Application 3: Sorry, Your Highn-ass
Hey, I'm here to review. :D The green eyes were gluing me to the floor. It was like the mysterious boy had cut my spinal cord, rendering me unable to ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 3
Hey, I'm going to skip a chapter and review this one first. Ayda explained the problem, and the glimmer of hope. I think this sentence is incomplete here. Am pretty ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 3.1
I'll make an attempt to give this chapter an adequate review. :D I gave him the smallest smile, inclining my head in a show of gratitude. My emotions stayed low. ...
Aug 25, 2016 -
Re: The Turmoil Within Reddington's Halls - Chapter I
Hey, I'm here to review this chapter. Reddington Academy has been a prestigious school since the year it was built. 1873, to be exact. An unmarried woman by the name ...
Aug 20, 2016
