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Lightsong

Lightsong

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Cuddle Application 4: What's the Number for 911

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D The material was thick in my hand and a hiding space just small enough to fit a young girl. There's no grammatical error in ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Werewolfing. 5

    Hey, I'm here to leave a review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so pardon me if I'm confused at parts that have been explained earlier on. :D The restaurant ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chaos Edge 1.1

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D "What would you do if the world was ending?" Since the question is about something that might happen, I think it would be best ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 3, Dinner

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Neither Father nor Mother looked satisfied with our answer. I introduce you to the first rule of writing: show, don't tell! :D You've told ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 3, Part 2

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D Ayda's pack and Madeline's arms full of herbs. I realized when I see the word 'pack', it reminds me to a pack of wolves ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. I generally avoid novel chapters unless the novels have interesting titles, and this one does. I would check a novel chapter to ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue

    Hey, I'm going to start with this piece for RevMo. BE HONOURED. Lel, just kidding. :D Let's get into it. He could taste the blood that was slowly running down ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 33

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :D His voice is a hiss in my ear as his icy ears look at the door. You know what I'm going ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Other Re: The Daily Life of Nomaru-kun - Prologue: Normal life

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. This prologue excels in being humorous without trying too hard, which is a huge plus for you. The event is unfolded naturally, ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 2 Part 2

    Hulloo, I'm here to review. Have been meaning to, actually. ;) "I'm here, it's okay!" she said brightly. A better adverb would be better used here. 'brightly' just makes the ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Midori - a RWBY/Shattered Moons side story

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D Evidently, her mom had helped herself to them in the morning while Midori slept in. Somewhere outside, she heard the rhythmic hacking sound of ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Cuddle Application 3: Sorry, Your Highn-ass

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D The green eyes were gluing me to the floor. It was like the mysterious boy had cut my spinal cord, rendering me unable to ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 3

    Hey, I'm going to skip a chapter and review this one first. Ayda explained the problem, and the glimmer of hope. I think this sentence is incomplete here. Am pretty ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Cat Steps Chapter 3.1

    I'll make an attempt to give this chapter an adequate review. :D I gave him the smallest smile, inclining my head in a show of gratitude. My emotions stayed low. ...

    Aug 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Turmoil Within Reddington's Halls - Chapter I

    Hey, I'm here to review this chapter. Reddington Academy has been a prestigious school since the year it was built. 1873, to be exact. An unmarried woman by the name ...

    Aug 20, 2016


Stupidity's the deliberate cultivation of ignorance.
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