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Lightsong

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Cuddle Application 4: What's the Number for 911

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D The material was thick in my hand and a hiding space just small enough to fit a young girl. There's no grammatical error in ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Werewolfing. 5

    Hey, I'm here to leave a review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so pardon me if I'm confused at parts that have been explained earlier on. :D The restaurant ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chaos Edge 1.1

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D "What would you do if the world was ending?" Since the question is about something that might happen, I think it would be best ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 3, Dinner

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Neither Father nor Mother looked satisfied with our answer. I introduce you to the first rule of writing: show, don't tell! :D You've told ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 3, Part 2

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D Ayda's pack and Madeline's arms full of herbs. I realized when I see the word 'pack', it reminds me to a pack of wolves ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Snow Queen (Chapter 2)

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. I generally avoid novel chapters unless the novels have interesting titles, and this one does. I would check a novel chapter to ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Prologue

    Hey, I'm going to start with this piece for RevMo. BE HONOURED. Lel, just kidding. :D Let's get into it. He could taste the blood that was slowly running down ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 33

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :D His voice is a hiss in my ear as his icy ears look at the door. You know what I'm going ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Other Re: The Daily Life of Nomaru-kun - Prologue: Normal life

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. This prologue excels in being humorous without trying too hard, which is a huge plus for you. The event is unfolded naturally, ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 2 Part 2

    Hulloo, I'm here to review. Have been meaning to, actually. ;) "I'm here, it's okay!" she said brightly. A better adverb would be better used here. 'brightly' just makes the ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Midori - a RWBY/Shattered Moons side story

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D Evidently, her mom had helped herself to them in the morning while Midori slept in. Somewhere outside, she heard the rhythmic hacking sound of ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Cuddle Application 3: Sorry, Your Highn-ass

    Hey, I'm here to review. :D The green eyes were gluing me to the floor. It was like the mysterious boy had cut my spinal cord, rendering me unable to ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 3

    Hey, I'm going to skip a chapter and review this one first. Ayda explained the problem, and the glimmer of hope. I think this sentence is incomplete here. Am pretty ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Cat Steps Chapter 3.1

    I'll make an attempt to give this chapter an adequate review. :D I gave him the smallest smile, inclining my head in a show of gratitude. My emotions stayed low. ...

    Aug 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Turmoil Within Reddington's Halls - Chapter I

    Hey, I'm here to review this chapter. Reddington Academy has been a prestigious school since the year it was built. 1873, to be exact. An unmarried woman by the name ...

    Aug 20, 2016


Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something.
— Plato