Lightsong

Hey, I'm here to review. Poetry noob here, so don't be surprise if the review lacks quality! xD Here it goes. A black dog stalks the night, barking over the ...

Fun fact before I go reviewing; I searched up the meaning of bedroll. Why can't you just say sleeping bag? D: Oh wait, it's for the rhyme. Maybe. Never mind. ...

All right, here I am, typing on my phone. Review might be low in quality. First, I love the word play/irony you use in the title. Usually, the phrase is ...

Hey, Autumn. First Stanza Love the usage of jigsaw puzzles and the truth about how the couple do not fit so perfectly. It just shows there would be disagreements and ...

Hey, I'm here to review, representing Resources crew. ;) I'm sorry--for that one time, when I said that one thing, at that one place. On your lips I can see ...

Hi, I'm here to review. Er. I look up on Akron and what bad news that is associated with it, and I facepalm. Not gonna lie. I. Face. Palmed. Because ...

Hi, I'm here to review. I have mix feeling about this poem. Like Kaos, I am a bit confused about the myth you have here. Like, the story about Persephone ...

Hey, I'm here to review. Well. This goes under flash fiction, I guess, although it is not quite so. It feels like an expression of emotion, without the typical structure ...

Hey, I'm here to review. Let me see what I can do with this poem. Alright, so one thing that I notice in your satirical poems is that it can ...

Hey, UncleQrow. So. Er. The first vibe I get from this poem is not of romantic, but of... comedy. it is just that the structure and the limited vocabulary contributes ...

Hi, I'm back. I skip the second part, because... Huh. I am forgetting why. I like the first four lines. Something happens, probably the girl's fault, probably not, but it ...

Hi, I'm here to review. I hear your giggles and your laughs and see your smiles Before I comment on this line, I have to appraise you for using structured ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm here to review. :D Alright, so the first thing I'm going to point out is the use of italicization. It is painfully too much here, and ...

Hey, I'm here to review. Since I'm typing from phone, it's gonna be short. I think starting from this journal, characters that if before are important because they're reporting stuff, ...

Hey, I'm here to review. Once the human things were over - the things Seb had experienced during his days in the care home -, Dr. Smith handed Elliot a ...