Light_Devil!

Why hello thar! It's Light_Devil! here, you reviewed one of my works and I felt like I should return that favour. I apologise beforehand if I am a little bit ...

Hey, I'm Light_Devil, you reviewed one of my stories, so I'll pay back the favour. I apologise if I sound harsh beforehand. :D If you are serious about writing movie ...

Why hello thar, I have a few things to say about this. :P There are many grammatical mistakes. Make sure you fix them up. :) Also, don't forgot to put ...

I was reading through this and I kept on telling myself I wouldn't cry, however it was these lines that broke me, But I will not forget when I held ...

Why, hello thar! I just took a quick squizz at this and I would like to mention a couple of things. *clears throat* Number One. "If your characters are speaking ...

Hello, I'm Light_Devil and I'll be your reviewer today. :P I'll be nice. :D. Anything in red is a spelling mistake that I have fixed up, anything in green is ...

Hello, I'm Light_Devil and I'll be your reviewer for the day. I'll be nice. :P In blue I will have either picked out grammatical mistakes, spelling mistakes or just general ...

Okay, I may be excessively harsh, but I apologise beforehand so you know that I don't mean it! (In red I will fix up any spelling or grammatical mistake, common/general ...

*whistles* Firstly, I have absolutely NO idea what happened. Zero idea. Well, maybe a touch, Matt died. And your OC was heart broken. And then *brain explodes* What exactly happened? ...

I can't even write a proper review for this. The reason? It's already too good! I love the character - he is dark, bitter, sadistic and the best thing - ...

First off, this is sweet. I liked it, but I have trouble trying to imagine myself lying and believing that it is true. Usually, when people lie they know they ...

This is cute. Very cute. I have nothing much bad to say about this. I was like, "Awww." A lot actually. This is nicely written, but there are a few ...

Wow. This is quite a find. I love it. I can't find anything wrong with and I'm in love with you're style of writing. Beautiful. I didn't know that nightmares ...

Ummm, the first part was a little bit iffy for me. Read it out loud, it sort of sounds like the window is bright or the figure. Also, how do ...

Prologue [i]Screams, they echoed through out the entire stone walled dungeon. Please check that you don't double italicise, as this adds a quite amateurish touch and instantly deters any reviewer ...