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Wow, I can't wait to read what happens next! (pros and cons) As you keep changing to different characters many try and extend each part so we can have more ...

Wow. That was amazing. You're a really good writer! At the beginning I instantly became hooked and before I knew it I had finished reading! It was that good. It ...

Hi LLZ here. First I'd like to say that this poem is very interesting. I'm not quite sure what it's supposed to be about, but that's probably just me! : ...

Hi LLZ here. First of, I think it was a really good chapter. I've already read the other chapters beforehand and I really enjoy reading this. Plenty of description and ...

Hi LLZ here! I thought that your writing is very interesting and I love the story line. Though at some times I got confused with who was talking, but overall ...

Hi LLZ here for another review for the day! Well, to start of with I think it was very well written. I could easily imagine what you were writing about ...

This represents the definition of being drunk. It's genuinely funny. "I'm flying over the toilet bowl, with lavender leprechauns Landed on a kaleidoscope lawn Where a purple hippo Spreads marmalade ...

To say this has suspense and that it's mysterious you were definitely right. Though it's short that's what makes it affective. It's mysterious and its hard to rule out the ...

Hi LLZ here. "No, it's my money!" "Well we'll see about that!" She grabs Lucy's scissors and threw them at me.'- "I the two separate speech marks (if you get ...

Hi LLZ here. First with the nitpicks. "And he stares, he stares as if..." - the repetition doesn't flow, as it could be. It would be better without the repetition ...

1. Is this really necessary? 2. Well, are you? 3. Trust me I've done that before. 4. Eerm... ok. 5. Obviously that's something I would say. 6. I prefer to ...

Hi LLZ here, trying not to freak out! To me this is more like a poem, rather than a chapter. It is written in the structure of a poem, so ...

Hi LLZ here for another review for today! First I've got to say I love this poem. It rhymes and its catchy. It's more like a song than a poem, ...

"Krystal looked into the mirror and her eyes opened as wide as the last night when she strugled to stay awake and finish her and Drago's previous task. "I'm hideous!" ...

Hi LLZ here for another review for today. I felt that this writing was very new, refreshing and by far original. It's different to everything I've read from before. It's ...