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Thanks so much! I'm flattered! :)

Thanks for the honest review, first one that's been reeeeally helpful. I'll keep your tips in mind to make my story a lot better. :)

Thanks, I totally see what your saying, my punctuation can be a bit dodgy sometimes. Next time I won't write a poem at 1 in the morning though. Haha.

Thanks :)

Thank you for your kind words, I'll take that advice :)

Wow thanks! I will!

This says a lot in one sentence. This is very much genius material. Perhaps I am exaggerating but this little haiku piece utterly stunned me. Good on you for posting ...

Short, sweet and captivating. This poem really does serve as a main definition of love and romance. I can't really think of any necessary improvements to be made, it's too ...

I really appreciate the exterior simplicity of this poem that actually hides a lot of emotional depth. Those sort of poems are really breathtaking and additive to read. Spot on. ...

I was eating a sandwich while reading this, and when I got to the zombies eating the old man I felt sick. Haha, you should be proud you managed to ...

Beautiful and simple, but a little more punctuation might be needed. Like, instead of " Bleed for every little mark You've given me They bleed" add some commas after each ...

Wow that was well written! Simple yet really good. Your mention of the Mockinjay pin reminded me of the "Hunger Games" haha! Was that deliberate? Also I never knew black ...

Thanks a lot, I'll keep your advice in mind :)

Wow, thanks so much for the tips. I'll definitely take your constructive criticism on board. :)

Good.