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:) Thanks buddy.

Thanks for the feedback :)

Oh right haha good job :)

thank you so much :)

Thank you! This was exactly what I was hoping to receive! I'll fix it up :)

Thanks for the advice :)

Thanks, I appreciate the help.

Hi! Well done, you've got some nice description in here. Top job. However, I wouldn't call it a story, but I dunno....a fragment of ones mind? That sounds pompous but ...

I suppose that's a good point. :)

Thanks for the tips :)

Thanks for the helpful advice :)

Hey, Never read a pantoum before. I like the style, it's neat. As for the poem itself; hardcore, aching stuff....but in a good way of course. Keep up the pantoum-ing ...

thanks :)

thanks so much :)

Yeah I agree with you, did not intend to make it appear completely shameful, I just thought it would make the character funnier. Sorry if I offended you.