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This was a cool story. I like the name too; Lockie. This definitely was pretty suspenseful, but humorous at times as well. I don't know about you, but i laughed ...

This is almost like the epitome of a psychopath's minds. All that rage, self-loathing, deprived of healthy emotion-it really fits the criteria for someone a little mentally messed up. I ...

I think I might just crawl into a ball and cry. That was beautiful. Love and heartbreak, what a pity they commonly intertwine with each other to create tragedy. That ...

Hi Punkpanda! Now, the rhyming in this poem is great, and you seem to have put some thought into writing this, but I do have some criticisms to give. The ...

Awwww, this is a totally adorable poem that chimes truth. I love it. Just a little heads up on an though; "Prefect crime when heart one steals!" This doesn't make ...

Hi Blackwood, The poem was all well and good, description was pretty spot on. But I'm not going to sugar coat your review with compliments, because I suppose that's not ...

Hi Kateyperry89, I'm not going to do a Blackwood and shut down your piece completely, but I am going to judge this piece quite a lot, but in the nicest ...

What a lovely little essay, so honest and evokes a lot of respect from me as a reader. I can relate to you on some of those points. For instance, ...

Hi LightWolf, Now, I'm not going to go into the grammatical errors and all that jazz, because I'm not here to correct your work, but here to simply review and ...

Hi, I don't know what this was about hahah. But don't be insulted, I could just be a little uneducated or slow perhaps. Anyway! What I can make of it, ...

Hi Shauzer! This story is minblowingly disheartening, but in the finest sense. This piece of yours was highly original, and well thought out, which I can tell from the time ...

Hey Sushi! This poetry is actually really good, not to tedious and pretentious sounding like some poems can be,ugh that tires me. It was fast paced, the words you used ...

Hey, I see you attempted to write a rhythmic poem....I think. Well, assuming you did, the job was nearly top-notch, with the exception of a few lines that didn't quite ...

This was romantically upsetting, I suppose that's the way you want us to see it though. I agree too, it is so true that there is an element of beauty ...

Hi! What was the point of the grey highlighting? And why was this so simply AMAZING? Short, sweet, captivating. Love it. You clearly have a strong sense of emotion, and ...