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A touching piece, with clever use of bracketing. It's so true that the world would be a better place if everyone were truthful. The only criticism I have is perhaps ...

The poem has a kind of dry, careless quality to it which is fascinating. I also like the font you used, it is symbolic of the type of emotion that ...

OUTSTANDING! The language included in this poem is so tragically romantic! You clearly have a real knack for expressing your feelings! I love this bit; "I’m bored with twining scripture ...

Very depressing piece of work! But good all the same. :) I'd just like to point out though that you asked waaaaay to many questions in this poem. Asking questions ...

Good poem buddy but some of your grammar is a bit off. E.g. " As dawn began, a faun stands" that doesn't quite make sense. It is kinda like you ...

What a tragic poem, it is so sad when someone doesn't love you back. I like the simplicity of this poem, there isn't too much to take in but it's ...

Oh my goodness, this story had a great plot and scared me to bits! It just shows how creepy coincidences can be sometimes! What makes it even better is that ...

I love how you ask questions in your poem, that is always a creative decision to make. This is a remarkable concept to experiment with. Sometimes I find myself questioning ...

Beautiful. Tragic. Intense. Awesome. My heart was hooked on this the minute I began reading it. That's what you want from a reader, you want them to get involved, feel ...

Hahaha this is the most amusing short story I have read in a long time. I love how in your description you say; "not your average superhero family" that is ...

Hi, what fantastic descriptive skills you have! Very creative. It's an interesting topic you have meddled with, good job. My only criticisms are that you use too many full stops, ...

Hi, firstly I'll start with the praise. The concept you have juggled with is immensely powerful and truly gripping. I found myself getting sucked into the piece about two sentences ...