Lee0z

The way you've represented this story and interpreted what's going on for you is very interesting. Your emotions must be very distraught at the moment. It is always quite unpleasant ...

Hi ka, Lee here to review your work. Technical errors: First line, "ove" should be love. "You're like a kitty Mommy." Fourth line should be "smelt" instead of "smell". The ...

You could probably expand with this. It's not really an essay at the moment. There are some technical errors that Laure pointed out. I really think this would be more ...

I believe that scars are just stories in disguise. It may feel like a hopeless battle now, but one day you will look back at those scars and realise they're ...

I love this poem, the rhyming and timing, the power it brings. You've done a mighty job here. I think that you've done well with such a serious topic. A ...

Hello BloodVein11, I'm here to review. Okay, so I found your style of writing to be.. interesting. I do like it, however I don't recommend every chapter being like this ...

Hello Bugslake XD, here to review. Now, I don't exactly mind the pace of this piece, it intrigued me quite a bit. It was short and sweet. I see it ...

Hi Darkangel, XD Lee0z here to review, and sorry if this is a bad review, I'm horrible at reviewing. Anyway, here we go: Flow: I really liked the flow of ...

Hey Kanome, I'm a huge Adventure Time fan, but I always find it scary to write fanfiction of it since I'm worried I'll get the characters wrong. I have to ...

Hey Mint, it's Lee here to review! I've read the whole piece, and I have to say, I like it. It was nicely paced and was easy to follow. Your ...

Hello Moo, Lee here to review. ( I just made a rhyme and am very impressed in myself hehe) Okay, so your title, may I suggest you type in which ...

Hey Hearts, Lee here to review! I found this story, although it lacked description, to be very powerful. I found the mother's love to be very profound. Maybe you could ...

Hey Bacon, I'm Lee and here to review! Introduction: This really is mysterious, a person is going to die here? I'm guessing that this person is going to have to ...

Hi Fantasy, I'm Lee and I'm here to review your work! Please note that I have not read the first chapter, so bear with me! Is sentry a person? If ...

Hi Nina! I'm here to review! This story probably happens too quick, problem is, we haven't had enough time to get to know the characters, and therefore don't feel much ...