Lechatnoir

Hey, Ok, first I am going to tell you not to take sagnik's review to heart. A poem does not HAVE to be long and it doesn't HAVE to have ...

Hey! So, I really liked this little poem. Very simple, but packed a nice punch. I agree with the previous reviewer that the tense shift is a little confusing and ...

Hi! I agree with the previous review, that I would probably take this as some form of poetry rather than a short story. There's a few little grammatical errors, just ...

The title of this poem totally drew me to it- what a fabulous oxymoron! So, I guess a lot of people on here will moan about your grammar, such as ...

Hey, so I'm not a Christian but I still appreciated this poem. I guess I like the ideas, it reminds me of the poems I read at primary school in ...

So, where did you get the idea for this style visually? Did you use anyone for inspiration? As for my review, my main issue here was fragmentation and how the ...

Hey! Just to let you know, you can edit on yws, there will be a button to the right so you can correct your typos. However, you really should proofread ...