Layla

hi, well for starters, I like this. But the structure is what irritates me the most. When she talks, my heart it stops Her voice is a treasure, Her presence ...

Ok hi!:) I like this poem alot. But it's a little hard to find the whole point of this. The very last stanza is phenominal! The adjectives you use are ...

Sorry, but I have to disagree with the other editors... This is definitley beautiful. Your mother will love this. If I was a mother, I would definitely have tears of ...

Hey it's Layla. I liked this and the message you're trying to get out, but it's so SHORT. Try to extend it a little bit more. Are you familiar of ...

Hey! I see you barely just posted this lol. I just posted one of mine too. Nitpicks: till you entered my life. till you gave me your heart. I think ...

Okayy. Now I understand that, yes, guys have feelings about their love life, and a break up destroys their life too. Thank you for taking all of that...that anger, and ...

Oooookaaaaay, so there are a few grammatical errors in this. Being sad is a waste of time okay, here you could either put a comma or a period. But it's ...

Well, hello.:) how are you?? I'm good. Now, on to the review... Ok, so this was actually pretty cute. I'm not sure if I know the theme of it though, ...

I kiiiiiiiinda disagree with Eraqio. No, this poem is perfect the way it is. Buuuuuuuuuut,, yes, you could put this into two parts. But besides that, this was very good. ...

This...was probably....thee most..... Beautiful thing I have ever read. I have no nitpicks, no..... Questions, nothing. It's perfect. I would pay BIG money for this. Oh m gosh Im speechless!!! ...

Omg!! I loved this!! I am, too, a romantic kind of person. I wrote a little short story just like this, but every reviewer said it shouldve been poetry. Check ...

Hello. Hmmmmmmmm,, i love it!! You expressed your emotions to the ended relationship and the new one beginning with your friend, very well. Don't you hate that shit??? When your ...

Hello. Layla here. Okayy well this was very unique. But you haven't really given Rose a character yet, you know what I mean?? Okayy, we get it, she's a pyshcic. ...

Uuum wow ok. Well this was good. But is Facebook the only thing you go on?? If not, you should add that at the end, instead of repeating Facebook over ...

Yes, I absolutely agree with stelagineva. You might want to name this The Emptiness, or Changes, or The Nothingness. I don't know. I have THOUSANDS of titles I could give ...