-
Re: walking on water
Whoa, BlueSunset. I dig this poem entirely too much (is such a thing even possible?). I know this is a stellar poem because once I finished it I immediately had ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: DELETED
Hi Steam
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: An Unusual Meeting
Hi SugarApple! Woah, what a bunch of twists there at the end! There's so much good going on in this story. You have a great build of tension and intrigue, ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: My Mother.
Hi beautifulish! (What a fab username omg). I'm Lauren and I'm here to review! First off, let me say I adore short poems. There's something so fantastic about feelings or ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Ten
Nooooooooo Kale and God-pretending-to-be-his-dad. Just killing my heart. I'm so so glad that, despite all the awful things that have happened to Kale thus far in his life (being trapped ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Nine
Hi again! YO okay so I am totally behind the angry angels. I really like that you're playing with the common idea of angels and angelic behavior (which is, actually, ...
Mar 12, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Eight
Hello hello! Oooh new characters. That's one of the greatest parts of stories like this that switch perspectives a lot, you get all kinds of new characters! I'm already very ...
Mar 12, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Seven
And here I am again! What an...anticlimactic fight xD in a good way that is! I kind of love it when characters put up an astonishingly good beginning of a ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Six
Sacred! You can imagine my delight when I was scrolling through the green room and found SO MANY NEW CHAPTERS. So much delight! I've looked ahead to the next chapter ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Five
Sacred! And here I am again :) Alright, so re: my review on the last chapter. It sounds like there are THREE plotlines going, rather than the two I had ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Four
Hey Sacred! Back again for more~ As always, I really dig the details you choose for your descriptions. Your language is always really specific and interesting which does a lot ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Melt - 2.2 - Followers
Hey Lareine! Oooh the intrigue grows! I know you mentioned in your reply to one of my last reviews that the Moths are a large family which makes Lilli and ...
Feb 19, 2017 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Chapter Three (Pauline's PoV)
Hi Deep Crystal! Back again for another review. ;) You continue to balance your cast well, and the tension between Pauline and Kieran is still fantastic. I really enjoy the ...
Feb 19, 2017 -
Re: Melt - 2.1 - Followers
Lareine!
Feb 12, 2017 -
Re: Melt - 1.4 - Falling Girls
Lareine!
Feb 12, 2017