What I like about this poem is the hope element. You depict your feelings for your mom so well that I connected with you on some level. Very good poem, not much to critique. The part that struck me the most was this one: "When her Mother died and when my father wanted a second wife.
When my brother shrieked of pain and a demon got the best of my sister's life."
It is beautifully written as it is overwhelmingly captivating. Everyone needs a strong role model in their lives for when they're facing hardships. Thank you for this.
Points: 35
Reviews: 3
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