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Hi there, SavannahSamford! This was such a fun read! I could go on and on about how entertaining your narrator is or how interesting the mad-max-fast-and-the-furious wild dystopia conceit is. ...

And here I am again!

Hello hello!

Hello again!

Hello, darling!

Hi Willard! Man, I dig this poem. I'm a big fan of nature imagery, especially in poetry, and I love the way you blended those images with images of the ...

Hi again, lelu! Ooooooh man, the drama! My heart aches for Silira in this chapter, and I adore the way she's resigned herself to oblivion at this point. I very ...

Hi there, lelu! Sorry for jumping in midway, but it hurt my soul to see these chapters linger in the green room any longer! So I hope you'll forgive me, ...

Hi soundofmind! This is such a lovely, sweet poem. I really adore rain & storm imagery and I enjoy the way you address the storm directly. At the beginning of ...

Hi Cub! Man, this was such a great story. I was gripped from the beginning, and I like the way you twist our expectations of Haruto going missing. At the ...

Well, I started this review when it was still in the Green Room, at least. Hello! It's definitely been a while since I reach a bit of Cat Steps, and ...

Hello my darling! Oh man, I don't know how long it's been since I've read something you wrote, but I have a feeling it's been WAY TOO LONG. And boy, ...

Hi Wisteria! I think the biggest strength of this story is the dialogue. Your characters speak to each other so easily, and do such a good job of moving the ...

Hi RikuTalfon! It's so sweet that you wanted to write a poem for your girlfriend. I can definitely feel your emotions coming through for your girlfriend in this poem, and ...

Hi AudreyHancoff! For such a short piece, you hit the points of your plot arc surprisingly well. I can feel a beginning, middle, and end which is always hard to ...