Laure

I love this poem, especially by its simple but effective rhyme and the powerful meaning behind it. I love it how you repeat 'Look Look up and see you are ...

I always find haiku, the most powerful of poems. Such powerful meanings packed into seventeen or so syllables. When you think about it, is an incredible achievement and I especially ...

It all starts with a pencil! The title drew me in, what started with a pencil? Is a really well-written poem, and I can definitely relate. You've written quite a ...

Hello ocw2021, Laure here to review. See, most people are a grammar Nazi, a fluency Nazi or a spelling Nazi but me, sadly I'm not qualified to be any of ...

Oh, this is so deserves in the literary spotlight. Is very very very real, reflecting your feelings and as for most metaphors, especially this one. They hold the most truths ...

Holy....... wish I could write like that, honestly. As a fellow pianist I can definitely relate but perhaps not as passionate as you. It is still a very astonishing piece, ...

That was a very well-written piece, especially with the dialogue, you also described Behemoth very well. Highlighting the features and his personality, especially with fluffy. That was quite brilliant

W-O-W. Honestly, just wow. This is a really beautiful piece of poetry, actually I probably shouldn't call it piece, is much greater than that. I'm new here but I can ...