LastPaladin

You know I'm not sure what I think of this part of me is impressed the other part is annoyed at certain things small as they are. I suppose I ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. I wish I could enjoy these so popular 'woe is me' poems, but fate decreed instead I despise them with a ...

From first point of view this seems enigmatic, but as first impressions generally wrong, I read it a few more times. I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer and to me this tried to be cliché while being cliché it's a pretty impossible predicament for you, the fairytale is ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece tries and it's evident and for a first attempt it's pretty valid, I could even argue it's a valiant ...

It's ashamed this starts out well then just drones and on and on and never really did what I expect it just could have gone many ways including descriptive scenes ...

I am LastPaladin and I shall be reviewing your poem. I shall examine it thoroughly and decide why I don't like it, and why I think you should take my ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, what we have here is a great metaphor used to it's absolute limit and often at times just comes across as ...

Interesting Lumi, very interesting, I'm not sure how to begin this review, so I shall begin with what I worked out, it's about someone dying or experiencing death in a ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, considering what you said, I'll take that into consideration, that one it's old and two it was written for school. Both ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, what caught my eye about this piece was the title, now I'm sad to say huge let down on what would ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece wasn't awful it had some great lines, but what it really failed at what conveying certain idea and dropping ...

Hello as request Draax I shall review this, I'm LastPaladin as you well know. This piece seems more like half done, half finished or incomplete, it doesn't seem at all ...

Where to begin, where to begin, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer and this piece here is hard to review, it doesn't flow, doesn't seem to have any ...

How do you do I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this poem come across to me as all state never explain see your poem falls into the category ...