LastPaladin

Hello, I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. This is cute, but I'm afraid with me cute doesn't cut it. The line lengths switch about too much for one thing ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer. I liked this poem took me reading it twice to catch the theme. How it was actually about love. Although I like subtly but that ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer. My main problem with this is it's navel gazing and right away I'm bored, not because it's bad but because you just 'pushed' us out ...

Greetings, I'll be your reviewer. Now this poem did nothing for me, you ignore common practice of grammar and totally go for the jaded cliches littering many 'emo' type poems. ...

Hello, I'm going to be your reviewer for today. Now let me be clear, this poem bothers me, it seems slightly juvenile in sense, you practically hit us on the ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer. I be honest straight off this seems more like a song, and way you repeat some parts but slightly change theme seems more like a ...

Hello and never put yourself down when showing a poem, it sends wrong message, firstly it makes us think 'why bother on helping' since person seems so sure it's not ...

There are many things that stand out about this poem, the total lack of stanzas irritates but the message at the end has the same climaxing feeling as a song ...

I'm weak, you did this to me, you took me away. Return me. I don't want to fall I don't want to drown I don't want to feel alone I ...

Hello Forestqueen, I'll be your reviewer. I'm unsure what to say, sadly this comes off contrived and I'm afraid that's putting it lightly. It very pretentious. And really when your ...

MIST Hanging over valleys Clinging to the trees. Hiding this great land From viewers Like you and me. A blanket blowing in the wind Rising and falling. A white sea ...