LastPaladin

I LastPaladin agree with the others this is sloppy and comes across as largely and mainly contrived and forced, it tries to sound beautiful but the images 'NEED TO MAKE ...

Hey Hib, as request it is I LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. Okay, not often that something impresses but when it does, I point it out. You were ...

Greeetings sillyducky I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for this brief time we're together. Okay, I began to read this poem and right away this bit jumped out ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and firstly don't spit in the face of reviewers, secondly they waste valuable time to review this, so treat them with courtesy. Now on with review. You ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. Now let me explain something new a lot of this come across as same old, seen it, heard it, had enough ...

I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer on this, and though you have a good message this came across as more forced and preachy. There was no real emotion, ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin, welcome back Jess not seen you in yonks. Well glad to see you getting back into the swing of things so well. Once you explained in chat ...

Hey I'm LastPaladin, and I'll be your reviewer. And I really found this poem fantastic. It's unique, and really high lights great beauty. I love how you personified the wolf, ...

Hey I'm LastPaladin and I'm sorry to say this doesn't seem like a poem to me. It seems more like a cry for help you'd write in a blog. Sure ...

Hey I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, I don't know this was unique, but it had some issues. The one that stopped me reading was the repetition. It ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer what we have here essentially is a cliched mess that follows the same tired generic formula and never tries to stand ...

The worst book I've ever read was... Debatable Space. I can't remember the author's name since it has been so long since I read it. The characters were too basic ...

I'm LastPaladin and I read this twice so far, before never figured I'd review but after reading it again. I think I shall. This is great, but it would work ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. This poem was interesting it isn't exactly original but way it's done adds something. The rhyme at the beginning even helps and ...

Greetings, I'm LastPaladin, at first didn't like this, and to be honest still don't but within context this is a valid attempt if a little shortsighted. See as writers we ...