LaraJane

Danggg you ate with this one!! Ok ok I did really enjoy this so lemme break it down so I don’t just rant for you. I liked your comparison to ...

I really enjoyed this poem!! The shift in the indent really was an obvious change in tone and I liked the way the indent shifted depending on what you were ...

Dangggg I totally loved this like wow! What distinguishes a cause from its effect? This first line was such a good opening. It immediately made me think of the effects ...

Wow I love it! I will say I was a little confused reading my first time through (and possibly my second...) but I definitely did find some symbolism in these ...

I like this concept of rather than placing these people as memories, they're only stored as names. This interesting because it makes my thoughts jump to whether these people had ...

okay! This is very beautiful and let me tell you why! (Also I hope you continue to keep pushing out of this hard phase of your life and I hope ...

I love the voice of this story! It's very real and I feel like I'm in his shoes with the way you've laid it out -- well done! This style ...

He hung photos of people he hadn’t been in a very long time. This line. I loved it. I seriously found this so relatable because sometimes it can feel like ...

I love the repeated use of the word "maybe" it is so powerful. I'm sure this excerpt speaks to many people in different ways, and that's the best part about ...

Oh my gosh -- obsessed. This poem made me think of my best friend immediately, and honestly it is so beautifully drawn out!! The seventh paragraph which reads: Maybe that's ...

I love poems that make me smile after reading them and yours definitely did that! I'm used to seeing dreary poems so yours was a nice change of pace. I ...

Side note, I love the name Fletcher! I have a friend named Fletcher and I've never met anyone else with that name so that was a good find for a ...

I love this!! Everything about the tone and writer's voice is spot on. I like right here: because the only life support i want is you the spacing is perfect ...

okay I like where this is going! I'm curious to see if we find out more about the narrator it would be interesting if it twisted into the narrator becoming ...