LanguidLiger

Outwardly this poem seems to be about child birth. But you say its personal so I wont pick it apart. I would just like to say that the poem has ...

Hey Languidliger Id like to start off.....Dangit....I just failed

This seems to be about the loss of someone very important. Someone who has kept the writer alive for years, and now leaves them in solitude. The battle they fought ...

Thank you for the review (: Ill take your concerns to the drawing board!

Well then thats fine. Your lines as good as mine

Yeah this one was a bit lighter than my in my usual stule I admit. Thanks or the critique and all try to put it to good use. The golden ...

Oh i see. Sorry I guess I got a little cocky. The line is fine then, I just wasnt sure of what it conveyed. Hope you werent offended

Hahah well I guess I cant really tell you how to worship your deitys (:

Well as an atheist I cannot vicariously relate to your stance only refute it (: However I did not think that the work itself was bad. I would just like ...

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No please, by all means nitpick! I don't really have an eye for errors but singed did pique my bs meter. In short Im flattered, thank you for our constructive ...

It was sort of like a narration on hypocrisy. Thanks for the review.

I like this little poem. It echos my own thoughts. If your going for what I think you are, its that tou want some suitable company but when you look ...

Than you for your time. I'll take these things to heart.