LakeOfCancer

This was really good! I honestly wish you would write this novel, this novel seems like it would be absolutely stunning! And in away, I can relate to this person, ...

This is really well-crafted! You didn't have any mistakes, no grammatical errors, all the correct punctuation in the correct places, you did great! :D But anyways, I honestly absolutely love ...

This was really good! It's actually very funny, especially the last sentence, "Besides, this could not be so, cuz honest, I am gay." This was hilarious only because you would ...

This is amazing! I definitely love the prompt, it gives me a look into what you were trying to write, and I absolutely love this. I can't wait to read ...

This was amazing! I know that I don't know who the people were and I'm very curious to find out. but I loved it nonetheless! :) So, I don't have ...

This was amazing! I felt like you were trying to say the speaker had drank this potion that made him shrink into something so small it can't even be described ...

This was just... I have no words! Oh my god! I don't have any words! Um...I can't find anything for you to fix! Oh my god! Well, I love how ...

I love this, I may not know who this about in your poem, but I love it nonetheless!:) I don't really have that many suggestions, for you. Maybe just look ...

I am so sorry, at my school there are only a few people in my 8th grade that are Asian, and they all get made fun of for either being ...

I love this poem, while it may be short, it still says a lot about life. I love how you say that life isn't about being a piece of chins ...

I'm sorry, I wish, even though I have never met you, or even know who you are, that your grandpa was still alive to do all those things with you. ...

*looks at you, mentally, with a heart-broken face* Fluma? Your sister did this to you? She told you to purge? She's practically abusing you? Ya know, I hate planes, like...absolutely ...

Ok, like y bestie @emolemon (emocinnafruitbun with glaze) said, the opening felt as if I was staring a story but I had no idea where the beginning was of that ...

This is so beautiful, and, I can relate to this too. I look into the mirror everyday, whether I want to or not. Every time I see acne and a ...

Anne, this is what I want to say all the time to people who make me depressed, that's 30% why I am the way I am. I think that when ...