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he MilkandCookies! I'm here to review! Every step makes the drums beat faster. why? make this more explanatory every step keeps on strengthening my call. REPLACE this part is good. ...

HI! pointe2drama here for the final ch. you have posted. Grammar: well, its good but there is some slang I have no idea what it is. Duw? Ta? etc. Storyline/Flow: ...

hi! back for ch.1 OVERALL: Grammar: perfect as always, except you don't spell realize realise.. you spell it REALIZE STORYLINE/FLOW: much, much better. MUCH BETTER! not by my point of ...

HI Skins! here as requested... I'm going to give you my overall impression by just reading it: Grammar: Excellent, no problems what's so ever. Storyline/flow: though I like how much ...

kay, this is awesome! I'll come back and do a better review later but heres a note: when adding work to a pre-published work: it's better to hit the edit ...

HI! I'm pointe and I'll be reviewing you today! "Large latte, please." AWESOME! i love it when a story/chapter begins with speech! I said in a timmid voice to the ...

OHMIGOSH... I feel soo horrible for your friend. Please tell them us here at YWS hope she recovers.... The two girls sat in the back seat of the little blue ...

HI [user]meep(:[/user]! I'm going to review you today, because I used all my points posting chapters to my novels. She scatters seeds in the snow, her alabaster skin melting into ...

hi! I'm pointe and I'm going to review you today! A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far as eye can see. On a plinth ...

hi! I'm pointe and I am going to do a review for you today :) I'm a prisoner once. ONCE? what does this mean? I'm a prisoner, tied on the ...

hi! Pointe2drama here to give you a review :) Friendship is certainly the finest balm for the pangs of disappointed love. Jane Austen Jane austin? I am already a fan ...

hi wicked wonder , Pointe here to do a review! This is who I should be: Flicking through magazines, seeing thin models. Cutting out the pictures, covering the mirror. This ...

Hi! Pointe her as requested! Maryland, May 6, 1900 " Hurry Belle!" My mother yelled,"We musn't be late!" Why of corse not. Who would wish to be late for a ...

Hi! I'm pointe and I'm going to review you today! I'm a leader but a born follower A traveler that needs to settle down somewhere, A boy trapped in a ...

Hey! pointe here as requested! Dear Toby, My day went by like a speeding bullet. Wake Up. Bathroom. Breakfast. School. Walk home. Homework. Bed. Really this is how I go ...