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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rejection

    Hi! here for your contest winning review! I came upon the words of naught sought out on one, a selfish thought-to rid the sorrows of the flesh, free of my ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Dear Mom (Hair Story)

    hi Bookie! I'm pointe and I am going to review you! Dear Mom, For as long as I can remember, the length of my hair has played a part in ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: (third edit) Power of Pop Secret- Erik's View- Part 1

    hey bubbles! here for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dun-du-a- da! Anna Trueman sat awkwardly beside me outside Room 239, quietly sobbing. this b

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love I (Decay)

    Hi, pointe2drama here as requested. I don't think we can go backto the days when we would whisper in the decaying light and you would trace little Decaying light? what ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter Two

    hey! I realized I had reviewed the first ch. but not the second, so I'm here to review! Surprise is this the name of the chapter? If it is put ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)

    hey t.o.o. here as requested :), i think that you have captured the art of supspence very well. You seem to know exactly where to slip a new turn in ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Lie To Me~2

    here for ch. 2! 2 My parents hadn’t returned home when I got home. I hurriedly stuffed my guitar underneath my bed, put a cardigan on over my ‘slutty’ tank ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Lie To Me~1

    Because you reviewed me, I'm reviewing you! First off: I like how real it is that she doesn't have a facebook or cell phone :) 1 Nathan Perkins killed himself ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Igneous Rock Ch.1 Part.2

    hey narniafreak! whats up? here to finish the review! This is so good. Much better than Part one of Ch. 1. I have no complaints. but a few questions: ~who ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Against All Odds Prologue (NaNo)

    Hi I.L.! Sorry it took so long..... I have been really busy.. But I'm here now. It was a regular working day in the fields of southern Ceylonus. The Woodsors ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Igneous Rock Ch.1 Part 1

    Hi narniafreak, sorry it took so long. I hadn't checked my WRFF thread in a while. So lets get started! I'm doing an overall review for you today :) Grammar: ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Let's Just Say...

    Hi! Pointe here as requested! I didn't get it till the end but this is two little girls playing dress up. I like it, though at the beginning I didn't ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Bouquet of Bruises *edited*

    hi! pointe2drama here as requested! Scarlet petals leaked from her skin, nice intearesting way to say blood danced between torn pores to the world above, a rose perfume strong enough ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Thoughts Inside My Heart

    hi, Pointe here as requested. First of all thank you for saying my work is impressive, if you ever have the time please review some! Not long ago I shared ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Know I'm Here(1)

    hi shubbi, Pointe here as requested. AMY: The screeching of the chalk against the blackboard coincided with the prom night being replayed inside my head. The flashing lights, the disco ...

    Dec 14, 2010


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