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Re: And She Fell (1)
Alright I will take a look :) Thank you for replying!
Jan 31, 2017 -
Re: 1,000 Hands
Thank you. This review seemed pretty useful. Thanks. I may just edit this and use what you had said. :) Sounds more 'flowy' in that sense.
Jan 31, 2017 -
Re: 1,000 Hands
Thank you for the comments and reviews guys! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Jan 30, 2017 -
Re: 1,000 Hands
Note: I am fully aware that the poem may have some formatting issues. The publishing center was not cooperating with me at all. If you have tips for that then ...
Jan 30, 2017 -
Re: a little like you
Well with formatting, there may not be a big problem with it, and I'm not a person to complain. But sometimes there are people like publishers or teachers or even ...
Jan 28, 2017 -
Re: a little like you
Oops! I may of messed some of the capitalization up but you see what I mean :)
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: Neoptolemus Pyrrhus
Well I see Dante, like said in the review, but I can Virgil too. Both have lively, bloody, and beautiful poems.
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: My Grandpa Is Dead
If you're talking about any poems I have done, I didn't post any yet. I will soon though. Stay tuned i guess :)
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: I Planted a Seed
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Jan 19, 2017
Hey there! It's LadyShadows! I absolutely ADORED this poem! It gave me that heavily symbolic feel to the poem. It was true though, as everyone plants seeds in their lifetime. ... -
Re: I Planted a Seed
Hey there! It's LadyShadows! I absolutely ADORED this poem! It gave me that heavily symbolic feel to the poem. It was true though, as everyone plants seeds in their lifetime. ...
Jan 19, 2017 -
Re: The first time I saw her...
This is cute. I love it. It shows the power of true love and the different perceptions of beauty.
Jan 18, 2017 -
Re: The first time I saw her...
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Jan 18, 2017
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Re: The Escape Plan
This...This...So...beautiful..This made me cry so much. You are a delicate, wonderful writer. You show parts of real life that most people try to hide. You show how teens are misunderstood ...
Jan 18, 2017 -
Re: My Grandpa Is Dead
You know, I think this very much, I think it's a great piece of work. It pours out emotions that people like to hide when they're dealing with a great ...
Jan 18, 2017 -
Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned
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Jan 18, 2017
I like the poem. It's real. And this piece holds the thoughts of a person, and holds close to the paper it was born on. However, as much as this ...
