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LadyPurple

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Fall of Domina Clepta -Chapter Two

    Hi! I'm LadyPurple! I'm here for your reviewing needs! Ok! It had only been two days sense she sent her letter; she had not expected to get a letter back ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: ice princess;part 2

    Hi! I'm here to deliver a review! :P You need to space more often. The words at the start of a new sentence are too close to the punctuation. Here ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Science Fiction, Horror Re: The Voice

    Wow. That was dark and chilling. But I enjoyed it! I did not actaully find any errors. Maybe I missed them and hopefully someone else will catch them. I only ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Horror Re: The Grave

    I must point out only a few errors. The word sound and ground seem to be misspelled. Otherwise I quite like this ^_^ . That's all I really have to ...

    Mar 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Pain That Feels So Good

    Hi. I am LadyPurple here to deliver a review! Everyone else has touched on some very good points do I won't bug you with those. My only nit pick is ...

    Mar 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Daggers

    Hey! You joined yesterday! WELCOME!!! We shall move on to this review! Woo! From time to time you missed the space bar but that happens to everyone. I just wanna ...

    Mar 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Bloodlust

    Alrighty, hello! I am LadyPurple, your reviewer for the day! Jumping into the story I can already see this deals with a touchy subject. Self-harm really is an addiction and ...

    Mar 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Stranger

    You may need to break up your paragraphs. If, like me, this is the site messing up and you originally had it all broken up and stuff, ignore this next ...

    Mar 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Stranger

    You may need to break up your paragraphs. If, like me, this is the site messing up and you originally had it all broken up and stuff, ignore this next ...

    Mar 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: {untitled for now}

    Hiya! I see you are fairly new! WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am LadyPuple and I will be your first review of the day! I'd like to start off with this: I liked ...

    Mar 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Boobs

    I have got to say.... this.... this has left me breathless. Never have I read something with such emotion nor have I seen such talent. It is so amazing that ...

    Mar 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Finding Love As A superstart

    Hello! I'm LadyPurple. I can see you're pretty new to the site. WELCOME!!! Now, onto the review. I do think it could use some work. The spelling, grammar, and puncuation ...

    Mar 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: In the Unlikely Event...

    Hi! I am LadyPurple and I will be reviewing you on this fine day in 2013. Onto this poem, I really like it. To me it flows well. The only ...

    Jan 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Karen's Birthday

    The first thing I would like to point out is the fact that you don’t always capitalize the beginning of every sentence. For example: after no answer he kept on ...

    Dec 28, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Songs That Saved Me

    First off, I already really like this. The emotion was great and very sad. :( The only problems seem to be punctuation. This sentence is going to be my example: ...

    Oct 14, 2012


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace