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Re: The Fall of Domina Clepta -Chapter Two
Hi! I'm LadyPurple! I'm here for your reviewing needs! Ok! It had only been two days sense she sent her letter; she had not expected to get a letter back ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: ice princess;part 2
Hi! I'm here to deliver a review! :P You need to space more often. The words at the start of a new sentence are too close to the punctuation. Here ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Voice
Wow. That was dark and chilling. But I enjoyed it! I did not actaully find any errors. Maybe I missed them and hopefully someone else will catch them. I only ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Grave
I must point out only a few errors. The word sound and ground seem to be misspelled. Otherwise I quite like this ^_^ . That's all I really have to ...
Mar 26, 2013 -
Re: The Pain That Feels So Good
Hi. I am LadyPurple here to deliver a review! Everyone else has touched on some very good points do I won't bug you with those. My only nit pick is ...
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: Daggers
Hey! You joined yesterday! WELCOME!!! We shall move on to this review! Woo! From time to time you missed the space bar but that happens to everyone. I just wanna ...
Mar 14, 2013 -
Re: Bloodlust
Alrighty, hello! I am LadyPurple, your reviewer for the day! Jumping into the story I can already see this deals with a touchy subject. Self-harm really is an addiction and ...
Mar 14, 2013 -
Re: Stranger
You may need to break up your paragraphs. If, like me, this is the site messing up and you originally had it all broken up and stuff, ignore this next ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: Stranger
You may need to break up your paragraphs. If, like me, this is the site messing up and you originally had it all broken up and stuff, ignore this next ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: {untitled for now}
Hiya! I see you are fairly new! WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am LadyPuple and I will be your first review of the day! I'd like to start off with this: I liked ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: Boobs
I have got to say.... this.... this has left me breathless. Never have I read something with such emotion nor have I seen such talent. It is so amazing that ...
Mar 7, 2013 -
Re: Finding Love As A superstart
Hello! I'm LadyPurple. I can see you're pretty new to the site. WELCOME!!! Now, onto the review. I do think it could use some work. The spelling, grammar, and puncuation ...
Mar 2, 2013 -
Re: In the Unlikely Event...
Hi! I am LadyPurple and I will be reviewing you on this fine day in 2013. Onto this poem, I really like it. To me it flows well. The only ...
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: Karen's Birthday
The first thing I would like to point out is the fact that you don’t always capitalize the beginning of every sentence. For example: after no answer he kept on ...
Dec 28, 2012 -
Re: The Songs That Saved Me
First off, I already really like this. The emotion was great and very sad. :( The only problems seem to be punctuation. This sentence is going to be my example: ...
Oct 14, 2012
