Young Writers Society

Hi! I liked it very much. I think it was an interesting read: to break into the villain's mind and to know that villains aren't always villains. Particularly interesting was ...

Hello there! I liked this piece. A lot of sci-fi writers explore the theme "why aliens don't visit us." Therefore the theme you chose to write on is a very ...

Hi! I liked the story. It's a nice setting for a short. There are some things that confused me and then there are some things that made me think, which ...

Hello there! I don't know much about the structure or rules of poetry, so I will restrict myself to commenting on the feel. I absolutely loved this poem. I think ...

Hello there! I liked it! Here are some suggestions I'd like to offer: There was this guy at the Starbucks I was staying at. I'm not sure why you used ...

Hello there! I love this little piece that you have presented here. I love the description. The sentences are well constructed and easy to understand. You have chosen elegant words ...

Hello there! I love it. The poem describes the act of hunting from two perspectives: one who hunts for survival and the other who hunts for pleasure. The act of ...

Hello there! What a wonderful poem. It truly resonates the pain of being alone. Somehow the poem can represent both a person who has aged and awaits nothing but death ...

Hello there! I love stories that begin one way and end another way. I love the whole connect with carbon monoxide and the math/chemistry problem. And I also loved Michael's ...

Hello there. It's a nice little story. However, I apologize, for I don't get what is happening. I'm not sure what the last line means. Perhaps the thief and the ...

Hello there! I really like this poem. Since I don't have much knowledge about form and structure of poetry, I shall be commenting on the feel. I like this poem ...

Hi there! I like the premise of the story. This is a neat prologue. It is the classic good v/s evil scenario, with Angels and Demons in play. Reminds me ...

Hello there. I loved it! I'm not good at poetry and I don't understand how it works, so you can go ahead and disregard what I'm about to suggest: All ...

Hello there! I don't see any problem concerned with grammar or spelling. The sentences are nicely constructed and are easy to understand. There are a few pointers I'd like to ...

Hello there! Some suggestions: After truly realizing what I’d done. I collapsed and crawled back to the center of my room where I laid down and cried myself to sleep ...