LadyFreeWill

Well, this story did not make all that much sense, but maybe I did not start from the beginning. Over all, it was well written and the grammar was very ...

After class I stood outside taking in the gentle breeze as she walked to me her face filled with happiness as she whispered the words I had been longing to ...

Oh if the Unicorn tries to sodomize me again I'm going to cut off his fucking dick and then make him swallow it and cut off his horn and shove ...

[quote="dregymayfield"]I guess the other 21 people before me are lamewads who can't leave a post. God, that pisses me off when we submit our work and all these people read ...

Y ou're a little boy in the rain when you look at me and deep in your eyes I find a home. Y ou're a little boy in the sun ...

Ohh! I get it now! This poem is about mermaids and stuff! Well, you've certainly put things inn perspective! When I read this, I definitely don't imagine Ariel! Truly amazing! ...

I have too many important plans That just Don’t involve you A heartbeat song A heartbeat gone I especially like the last stanza, even though it is only two lines. ...

Woohoo! Another excellent poem! I do NOT know how you think of all these stuff! You must be some sort of genius! I like the style in which you write ...

WHOA! I LOVE this! At first, I was all like, 'why does he keep repeating the same lines?' but this poem is very passionate, and the repetitive lines seem to ...

They scrubbed and polished, straightened, mopped; Tidied, neatened, freshened, stopped … … Then dusted, ironed, folded clothes; Watered flowers, goodness knows! But in a moment all was clear, the

the know that the dousing lies ever so precariously o'er their weak shine That was a bit confusing for me, but maybe I'm just dumb :) I like the dark ...

Hm. Well, I suppose this play was mildly amusing. Juliet's stupidity was really getting on my nerves, though [frowns, remembering Juliet's stupidity]. Over all, though, this was an alright story. ...

Whoa! Now usually people read a poem and then rave about how deep and meaningful it is (Seriously people; "the Fog"? It's a stinking six lined poem about FOG!), but ...

Okay, this might just be because I have no sense of humor or something, but that wasn't funny. So it makes me wonder why some people are reviewing and saying ...

I didn't spot any big mistakes in the writing and I thought it was pretty good. The only other comment I have is on the italicized and normal fonts. I ...