Published March 30, 2011
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Well, this story did not make all that much sense, but maybe I did not start from the beginning. Over all, it was well written and the grammar was very accurate. I do want to comment of the "a thousand G's and L's", though. I realise it's a figure of speech, but both letters only had three words. Then again... I suppose 'man of three G's' doesn't sound very impressive...
Good work, otherwise.