Published April 7, 2011
you're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes i find a home.
you're a little boy in the sun when you smile at me
and deep in your eyes i find the truth.
you're a little boy in the water when you cry in front of me
and deep in your body i find myself
you're a little boy in the rain when you look at me
and deep in your eyes i find a home
i find a home.
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Thanks for the comments! The poem's lack of capitalization is completely intentional, however. Thanks anyway for pointing it out!
This is a very inspiring poem! I'm impressed by the content -but less impressed by the lack of capitalization. If you fix that, this poem is golden! Excellent job!
I want to say nice job emma this was very well done and very creative ^^ I want to say keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon, as I truly enjoy your work. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!!!
Soulkana<3