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Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper: Chapter 2
Yes, Schadel! It's been so long! Sorry I couldn't get around to reviewing the last chapter. If you want, I could go back for that one. The new Schadel series ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 2
I'm here, at long last! I'm surprised you didn't pester me about this more. I kind of rely on being pestered so I remember to do things. Anyway, here we ...
Jan 1, 2016 -
Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 1
Here I am, fashionably late! Sorry about that. I really like the idea of this. I know there are a lot of fairy-tale retells floating around nowadays, but so far ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Ja’kath The Trickster
Hey! Care for a review? I understand that English isn't your first language, but I'm going to be a bit harsh and I hope that's okay. With any luck it ...
Nov 10, 2015 -
Re: The Dust of Worlds: Chapter Three
Hey, it's me! Sorry it took me so long to review this, meant to be here sooner! So, Foust's learning survival skills and fighting? That should be interesting. It's real ...
Nov 7, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Candy Caper Chapter 2
Ahg, feels! I wasn't expecting that! Claret is no longer comedic relief, now she's just an ass. Now I want to know what's so bad about being the youngest Grim ...
Nov 5, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Candy Caper Chapter 1
All these characters are just so adorable! Schadel and Claret's banter, and Chi's enthusiasm; it's all just great! I can imagine Chi's embarrassment at getting all dressed up and no ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: .
Hey! Care for a review? I like the characters you've introduced here. Their contrasting personalities are fun to read, and the way you let them bounce off each other instead ...
Nov 1, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 7
And I'm back again! Chi gets her own chair. I don't know if you meant that as a joke or not, but the sheer importance of everyone having a special ...
Oct 31, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 6
Hey! Me again. Schadel is so cute. He tries so hard to be helpful, but it just doesn't work. He actually seems kind of annoyed that Chi has to eat ...
Oct 31, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 5
Hey, review time! Ready? This whole thing with Chi and her friends is very well done. Even though you didn't put much focus on who Oona and Zarith were in ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: The Dust of Worlds:Chapter Two
Back again! Thanks for tagging me. I like the new title. The old one was alright, but this one sounds a bit more original. Moving on, This is looking really ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1 My first encounter
Hey! I can't resist an apocalypse story, so I'll just leave a review for you. Welcome to YWS, by the way! I have a lot to say so I'll make ...
Oct 18, 2015 -
Re: The Dust of Worlds: Chapter One
Hey! I said I would review something of yours and now here I am! This is certainly an interesting concept. I especially think the queen is a great antagonist. She's ...
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: Eternal Ties Chapter 2.2
Hey, it's me! Really enjoying this so far. Yay, some action! I don't know much about writing fight scenes, since I've never done it before, but I imagine that it ...
Oct 15, 2015
