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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    XD. Maybe you can read another one of my works, Abnormals (Part one) and/ or Sour Taste? If you want? You don't have to but I'd love some constructive criticism. ...

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    XD. Maybe you can read another one of my works, Abnormals (Part one) and/ or Sour Taste? If you want? You don't have to but I'd love some constructive criticism. ...

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    Thank you for the eye-opening review! I will rewrite this story with what you have said, and I hope you don't mind if I do quote some of what you ...

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Broken Snow Globe

    Aw, thanks lol!

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Broken Snow Globe

    No problem! I really enjoy your work.

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Abnormals (Part 1)

    I like Amethyst the most. She comes into the series as a main character later on. Lottie is pretty cool too.

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Sour Taste

    Thank you! In part three I'll add more space. Thank you for the suggestion and the review!

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Abnormals (Part 1)

    Thanks! Did you have a favorite character?

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Abnormals (Part 1)

    Thank you so much for this review! I can tag you on my wall and tell you when the next chapters come out if you want. :)

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: The Teenage Mind. Part 3

    Maybe: Anxiety, depression, PTSD, traumatic childhood? You maybe want to use one of the above if you have writer's block, I hope you don't mind me making suggestions. You don't ...

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fading Light

    Yes please!

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Abnormals (Part 1)

    Her backstory and the stuff about the guardians comes into the story in the later chapters. Thank you for liking it and I hope you will read the rest of ...

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Abnormals (Part 1)

    The backstories and the war and the guardians thing will be embedded late on. Thank you for the review and I'm so glad you like it. I'm making this into ...

    Mar 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Invisable

    This is a very relatable poem. The lines: Clinging to the memories of out childhood, and love All of the stories where we push and shove. Was so well written ...

    Mar 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Gone

    Thank you for clearing that up! I really did enjoy it.

    Mar 5, 2019


This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot