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Re: Colors (Chapter 1)
XD. Maybe you can read another one of my works, Abnormals (Part one) and/ or Sour Taste? If you want? You don't have to but I'd love some constructive criticism. ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Colors (Chapter 1)
XD. Maybe you can read another one of my works, Abnormals (Part one) and/ or Sour Taste? If you want? You don't have to but I'd love some constructive criticism. ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Colors (Chapter 1)
Thank you for the eye-opening review! I will rewrite this story with what you have said, and I hope you don't mind if I do quote some of what you ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Broken Snow Globe
Aw, thanks lol!
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Broken Snow Globe
No problem! I really enjoy your work.
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Abnormals (Part 1)
I like Amethyst the most. She comes into the series as a main character later on. Lottie is pretty cool too.
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Sour Taste
Thank you! In part three I'll add more space. Thank you for the suggestion and the review!
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Abnormals (Part 1)
Thanks! Did you have a favorite character?
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Abnormals (Part 1)
Thank you so much for this review! I can tag you on my wall and tell you when the next chapters come out if you want. :)
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: The Teenage Mind. Part 3
Maybe: Anxiety, depression, PTSD, traumatic childhood? You maybe want to use one of the above if you have writer's block, I hope you don't mind me making suggestions. You don't ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Fading Light
Yes please!
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Abnormals (Part 1)
Her backstory and the stuff about the guardians comes into the story in the later chapters. Thank you for liking it and I hope you will read the rest of ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Abnormals (Part 1)
The backstories and the war and the guardians thing will be embedded late on. Thank you for the review and I'm so glad you like it. I'm making this into ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Invisable
This is a very relatable poem. The lines: Clinging to the memories of out childhood, and love All of the stories where we push and shove. Was so well written ...
Mar 5, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1: Gone
Thank you for clearing that up! I really did enjoy it.
Mar 5, 2019
