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Re: Fairy Diary | Day 1
Hi Liberty, it's your least favorite Jade here to review your first ever Fairy Diaries chapter! Let's just go ahead and let me start by saying the maturity you showed ...
Sep 3, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 9
Hey, libs, all joking aside, I've come to review your work and let you know what I think. I have very little to critique, but there are a few things ...
Sep 2, 2022 -
Re: An Incomplete Drawing of Billie Eilish
Hi, Lulon! Im here to leave a review on your drawing. It seems you already have quite a lot of good feedback, but why not? It's so professional, I love ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: falling out of love
HI, Lulon! I'm here to leave a quick review! THINGS I LIKED: It flowed pretty well, and was very descriptive! It was pretty and very relatable. It was straight to ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: footprints in the sky
HI StarLitMind, I'm here to leave a quick review on your poem =D! I liked it. Compared to your others, it is very simple and hard-hitting. I like the background ...
Jun 29, 2020 -
Re: Entry 3 - Heather
Hi Cow, I'm here to leave a quick review on your work ^^ I liked the poem itself, it is very relatable and flows rather well. The plot is rather ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: Blame
Hiyo Gravy, I'm here to give you a review. :) The first stanza kind of rhymes, which gave me a false set up, maybe synonyms would be appropriate here? I ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: Deleted
Hi Libby, it's Jade (duh) here to randomly review something by you, I'm probably going to make you cringe. Okay, let's start. Day one was short, simple, straight to the ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: Movie Review Essay on "October Sky" (w/ bibliography)
Hi Lz, I'm here to leave you a review on your essay. I love movies so I really enjoyed reading this! The only thing I would change is this line, ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: Anxiety
Hi watcha, Jade here to leave you a quick review :) The first stanza really launched me into this, made me do a double take. It flowed well and I ...
Jun 23, 2020 -
Re: new moon
Hello, StarlitMind, it's Jade here for a very quick review. I loved the format, for starters. It has been one of the most creative things I've seen today. The poetry ...
Jun 23, 2020 -
Re: You Can't Write Yourself as the Hero if You Know You're the Villain
Hi, Pilot, I'm here to give you a quick review. The title caught my attention and I thought I'd check it out :) The first stanza has an interesting start, ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: Sleep Soldier
Hi, I'm Jade and I'm here to leave a brief review on your poem ^^ The first stanza is very captivating, but I saw one teeny mistake. I think you ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: Apples and Poetry
Her Haraya, it's Jade here to review your poem! I quite like the imagery though the metaphors feel rather forced in spots, the end of the second stanza, the market ...
Jun 21, 2020 -
Re: Sweet Memories
Hello! I'm Jade and I'm here to give you a quick review of your poem, so let's just get started. I think that it's sweetly upbeat in a way, and ...
Jun 20, 2020
