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Re: When the sweet child swims
I love this poem! It's very beautiful and I love the imagery. My favorite part was the fifth and sixth lines. I keep 're-reading them. You have so much talent! ...
Dec 8, 2014 -
Re: First kiss
This was so beautiful and so unpredictable! I loved it
Apr 7, 2014 -
Re: Nosferatu
Thank you so much! That means a lot! Ill work on it(:
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: Nosferatu
It actually isn't about a mythological creature, the whole poem is a sort of metaphor but thank you for the review! It was really helpful(:
Apr 4, 2014 - Re: The Boy Jun 17, 2013
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Re: Silver Ecstasy
Thank you for the advice, I will do so! Feel free to chat with me and ask away darling!
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: A Childhood Lover
This is really good! But i must ask, what made you want to write something like this? Is it personal to you? I really love it, you're a good writer!
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Dying to be Beautiful
Beautiful
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Music
I love this! It is the most beautiful and truthful piece I have read yet! You're very talented(:
Jun 10, 2013