LUNARGIRL

I loved your first paragraph and how you introduced the character. In my opinion the second chapter is still the best but that's only because I loved all the fighting ...

There were a variety of reasons why Rieka could’ve been pissed off. Maybe it was the lone soggy apple sitting in her otherwise empty stomach. Maybe it was the split ...

Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review!🙃 Prince Ambrose Averen of Arlan didn’t believe in fate. He didn’t believe in the monotonous preaching of the clerics that had been wandering the ...

The next morning I woke in an oddly joyful mood that was soon crushed as the events of last night came rushing back. Sighing loudly I buried my head back ...

"Sirens started to scream through the city, triggering those who’s dogs were out and more than likely disturbing those who were deep in study and homework or working off the ...

"“Valentina.” Magnus said from somewhere behind me where I had been fixing the saddle to my horse. “I’m taking a huge risk sending you out unescorted, so let me remind ...

"Kaltaine hit the hard ground as they arrived on the other side of the portal. A mix of emotions overwhelmed her and stopped her from getting up. She usually had ...

"Another day past and they were still on the road. Kaltain was felling more and more frustrated: she never felt comfortable in small spaces or meeting with new people. She ...

"She started waking up, but her head felt so heavy...Kaltaine didn’t felt like having the strength to get up. She didn’t really remember what happened. She slowly opened her eyes ...

This was a very interesting story. "The world is rich in magic, wonders, secrets, that await to be unveiled. Sometimes it could be easier if we didn’t,but we don’t always ...

Wow, great job! I really liked how it rhymed the the meaning it had. The feeling of being someone you are not, a fake. You described this feeling beautifully of ...

Wow, amazing poem! I loved how you started the poem with a question. I don't see a lot of poems that start off with a question. You were able to ...

WOW, THIS IS AN AMAZING POEM! I have never read a poem like this before. I loved you you made it into a game of chess. Your rhyming was great ...

This was a beautiful poem! I love your use of imagery throughout the poem and the picture it paints. I do think you could expand the poem so we would ...

Hi, LUNARGIRL here with a review! First off, great job! I really liked the way it flowed throughout the poem and how you separate stanzas by each year you got ...